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Elizabeth replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
Me too! I prefer Doctor Who, but Sherlock is just SO. GOOD. @hope @f5a8c3e92 @gracie-girl
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Elizabeth replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
There’s nothing wrong with bein a feeler @hope
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Elizabeth replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
Wow. @daeus
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Elizabeth replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
Did you just…quote what I think you quoted? @f5a8c3e92
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Elizabeth replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
@f5a8c3e92 Do not underestimate the power of the INFP…
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Excerpt from novel. Please critique! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 9 years ago
@f5a8c3e92 I didn’t see that you’d tagged me in this until just now, sorry!
All in all, I really like this excerpt. Generally, it ready pretty well, and flows pretty smoothly, but there are a couple of grammatical issues, although I’m sure someone better at this than I has already pointed them out.
In the prologue, the pacing is a little slow,…[Read more]
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Elizabeth replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
@f5a8c3e92 Not if the INFPs have anything to say about it… *grins*
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Elizabeth replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
I COMPLETELY agree with that. More than I can say. Ugh. @kate-flournoy @f5a8c3e92
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Elizabeth replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
Understanding sarcasm will always be a weakness of mine…I’m always too busy thinking about something else, lol. @kate-flournoy Thanks for the heads-up.
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Elizabeth replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
I…knew that. Yep. @kate-flournoy Rookie mistake. To be honest, I think I was too busy trying to come up with a witty retort to fully comprehend…
*coughs* Not like I zone out like that in real life. Ever. Yep.
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Elizabeth replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
I…knew that. Yep. @kate-flournoy Rookie mistake.
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Elizabeth replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
That…whatever you just said went wayyy over my head, sorry… @daeus *rolls eyes*
@kate-flournoy Oh, if I was going to be scared away, I would have done so a long time before I started my introductory forum…
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Elizabeth replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
Knowing what I know now, @kate-flournoy I’m surprised you didn’t ask me what type I am when I first joined KP…
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Elizabeth replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
I’m late to this convo (again) but YES! INFP’s represent!
@daeus Dangit, now I want ice cream…
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Elizabeth replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
I’m late to this convo (again) but YES! INFP’s represent!
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Writer's Corner #4 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years ago
If anyone’s still here, I’m working on a story…
@daeus @ethryndal @gracie-girl @everyone-else -
Elizabeth and
The Impossible Girl are now friends 9 years ago -
Elizabeth replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
*sniffles* Thank you. *dons superhero cape of preserving sanity and flies away to go do math or something*
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Elizabeth replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
Haha. This is too much fun. Better go get my schoolwork done, though… *cries because she can’t write as much as she wants to* @ethryndal
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Elizabeth replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years ago
@ethryndal Aha! I suppose this is what happens when you arrive late to the party…
Ooh, glitter–what fun we could have with that. *begins building glitter bomb*
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