Elizabeth

Shame, shame… *coughs* Actually, I can relate. @jess

@kate-flournoy

Okay. I went back through chapter two and added a few things, but also switched some of the dialogue around so that Ava says it, not Matthias. That way, the emphasis on how Matthias’ personality changes one he realizes Kara was friends with Tam should be clearer. Hypothetically. This way, Ava’s personality is developed, too.
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*hands you ice cream* Happy writing! @jess

@daeus Are you writing currently? I have raspberry-and-chocolate ice cream for ya if you are…

I see what you’re saying @daeus. I’ll definitely think about that.

@jess Thank you! Yep, helpful, you’re just reaffirming the thoughts already poking around this muddled brain of mine.

Also, I’m writing now.

Thanks for the feedback, guys!

@daeus Well…you were half right about why I’m thinking about starting a blog. I want it to be an outlet, not just a platform. The entire idea is still under consideration, but I want to be able to write about whatever I want. Focusing on just one topic would get boring after a while.

@ethryndal You sell yourself…[Read more]

Oh, that’s right! I forgot.

Okay, good to know @jane-maree. Haha…nature. Writing always trumps the outdoors for me. Unless I’m writing outside. *scratches head* Which…for some reason…I don’t do often? I should, though.

I can’t actually do any writing right now, but I wanted to leave a question here for y’all to answer.
For the KeePers who have a blog…why did you start it? What do you generally post on there?

I’m considering starting one, but I’m not totally sold on the idea. What would I post on it? What would I talk about?

@kate-flournoy…[Read more]

Um. *scoots backward a bit* Alright then. @dragon-snapper

Eek! I love it, Kate! @kate-flournoy

Hello all! I’ll be writing for a little while if anyone’s here.

Good points. @kate-flournoy
I think that Matthias definitely needs to be both. The moment in Kara’s hallway was supposed to be a “Hey, since we’re alone, I’m going to give you a warning” type thing, but I’m going to have to go back to the cafeteria chapter to subtly reference Matthias’ actual personality. Matthias doesn’t like Kara because of her…[Read more]

I updated my Google Doc with what I currently have of Chapter 3 @kate-flournoy

I’m actually going to run errands with my mom at the moment, but let’s just say that the character Matthias decided to be in this chapter is very similar to how I thought Blake was going to be, so I might have to change Blake a bit…

Goodbye! @audrey-caylin

I’m still around for a half-hour or so.

@Lady_Erin For future reference, Josiah’s tag is actually @aratrea.

Welp! I can agree with…whoever said it–this is the strangest introductory forum I’ve ever seen. I wish I could tell you that it isn’t always like this. But it is.

Sometimes, it’s worse.

Got it. Very cool. @audrey-caylin

*sips chocolate shake thoughtfully* *resumes typing*

Sounds really intriguing, though! Plenty of opportunities for plot twists and that kind of thing. @audrey-caylin

So…the character who was your protagonist has turned into the antagonist? How’d that happen?