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Elizabeth replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
Here’s the thing–Tam was taken out of the prison for hurting a guard. She broke the prison rules and was punished for it. Kara knows that, which is why, later in chapter 4 (which is still in the planning stages) she gets confused when she isn’t punished. Her view on the Warden changes when he seemingly shows mercy to her, but didn’t to Tam.…[Read more]
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Thank you, KP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
Well, on a website full of writers, you’re a rare treasure. A regular reader, someone who will judge the story for what it is and report and plot-holes back to us. I think that’s cool, which is why I asked ya.
But I’m happy to take a backseat until you’re free. @emma-flournoy *winks* I’ll wait.
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Elizabeth replied to the topic To the End of School *raises glass of Orange Juice* in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
Hm. @ethryndal Mind if I ask why?
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
Aha. Hello!
*grins* I can almost see your train of thought chugging along as you posted this.
Yes, the guy Kara killed is a Catastrophe–not that she and Ava know that. He’s an Earth Catastrophe, and the way he looks in my head is rather…jarring. He does look more like a monster than a human being, so there’s that.I’ve decided that I’m…[Read more]
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Elizabeth replied to the topic To the End of School *raises glass of Orange Juice* in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
@graciegirl Wait a sec, you’re only in 10th grade? *sits down* Um. Okay. I was somehow convinced you were graduating like me and Kate. Oops.
College…isn’t as scary as it seems. Trust me. You’re gonna be fine. Be excited! After all, it’s only the gateway to the rest of your life, right?
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Elizabeth replied to the topic To the End of School *raises glass of Orange Juice* in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
Kate…yes. Yes. Yes. Algebra. Gross.
Um…not to be annoying or anything, but could you possibly pop over to the google docs and read chapter 3? @kate-flournoy
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
Is it just me, or have the forums been quieter as of late?
Anyway, I’ll be on and off writing and planning throughout the day if anyone wants to join me.
@winter-rose @dragon-snapper @kate-flournoy @ethryndal @jess @daeus
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Thank you, KP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
Yeah, it’s fine, Emma.
And honestly…I have tried. My family takes my ambitions seriously. They respect the fact that I want to have a career as a writer. They’re supportive that way, but when it comes to everything else…my writing doesn’t get the time of day. It’s frustrating.
Maybe you should start a waiting list for your beta-reading @emm…[Read more]
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Elizabeth replied to the topic To the End of School *raises glass of Orange Juice* in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
I’m graduating high school this year, but I also have my first year of college completed thanks to Dual-Enrollment. I’m thrilled to finally be starting college, but a little sad to leave my younger high-school friends behind. I’m going to school at home, though. (Go Bulls!)
Oh, goodness…advice. Honestly, a lot of what I could say, @aratrea…[Read more]
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Blogs: What Would You Like to See More of? in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
@kate-flournoy You on?
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Thank you, KP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
@emma-flournoy It’s no big deal, but I just wanted someone with a different perspective to read what I have of my WIP–and by different perspective, I mean someone who’ll read the story for what it is, focus on plot and characters instead of grammar and structure.
I’d ask my family, but they don’t take my writing seriously.
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Thank you, KP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
Hey, Emma, can you do me a favor? @emma-flournoy
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Thank you, KP! in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
Ah…siblings…sometimes I wish mine would just let me be wrong lol. @emma-flournoy @kate-flournoy
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
@jane-maree I’ll be on until 10:15EST
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
Hi! @dragon-snapper
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
Ew…numbers…keep them away from me! @jane-maree *sends you hugs and support*
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
@kate-flournoy I’ll be writing for awhile, maybe we can pop onto google docs and break a few things down?
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
@jane-maree That would be great! I’d love to hear what you think.
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Elizabeth replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
I’m doing a few things for my math class right now, but I hope to get to writing shortly.
Truthfully, I meant to log on and get some writing done last night, but my parents surprised me with an early graduation present–an iPhone 7!–and backing up my old phone, taking pictures off my old phone, then getting my new phone to connect to iTunes and…[Read more]
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Elizabeth replied to the topic A Time To Die in the forum Book Discussions 8 years, 11 months ago
Sorry to interrupt, but what series is this? Who’s it by?
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