Ben Powell

@shannon Thanks I think I may have found something *praying desperately*
@emil idk…. But i don’t think so… 🙁

Yeah I have looked there… Idk she uses GD only fom what I know, and I can’t call her ’cause she’s at our friends wedding…. which we couldn’t go to so it makes everything worse…. 🙁 🙁 @emily

@xonos-darkgrate this is what I told the other’s : “they rebeled they could have been banished to another planet, and live happy lives..”

@emily No it wasn’t easy.. yeah that’s why she asked me to help her… I was able to but my “text book” to good use. She is writing about a historical character that almost died giving birth, but she used the wrong complication for the stage of birth she was in. XD 😛

@catwing lol. XD

@graciegirl @kate-flournoy NOOOOOOO!!!! People they saved the galaxy, even though they rebeled they could have been banished to another planet, and live happy lives.. sorry I bawled at the end…

@emily yes it does, I was trying to help write that scene and eat dinner not the best combination…. except I’ve had dinner interrupted by real birth’s before so….

Yeah, @Hope‘s definitely the one to ask if you have fairytale questions. 😉

@jess-penrose this looks like a very solid idea. However, the one thing that’s sticking out to me is that you have no plot twists. There are no reveals— no changing of the scene or forcing existing scenes to be viewed in different lights.
One of the reasons for this is that Taryn has one goal to pursue throughout the entire story and it’s the…[Read more]

@catwing THAT’S IT. I LOVE YOUR OPTIMISM. KEEP IT UP. DO NOT SUCCUMB TO THE DARK SIDE.
I may or may not actually have half a dozen scenarios worked up in my head about how his redemption arc could go… and how the moviemakers could ruin it. *scowls*
Optimism though. We must be optimistic.

@graciegirl nope, the fact that they died was my fave thing too. *nods*

@catwing whoa, pretty cool.

@lifeofkatie well to be fair I never claimed to be sane. *raises eyebrows*

@lifeofkatie I will join you in that camp!!! 🙂 😉 😛
@kate-flournoy *rolls eyes and laughs uncontrollably*

@catwing Sadly I’m just now finished…… Man I didn’t know (helping) writing a birth scene was so hard…. (trying to be historically accurate and non-graphic)

@catwing ikr!!

@salome01w4g I was being sarcastic, if that’s what you’re asking. 😛

@catwing only sorta!

@kate-flournoy is that a good comment or a bad one?? *smirk back* 🙂