Ben Powell

@Daughteroftheking oh my word yes isn’t it awesome?? *throws confetti*

@Sam-Kowal…to be entirely honest I don’t even remember what Mizzy’s power was. O-O

@warrioroftherealm Well, it seems to me that in medieval Norse/viking culture they used a lot of v’s, o’s, and k’s.  In England (their main adversary) at the same time, there was a lot of use of the letters “ae” and “th” together, as well as a great many d’s and l’s.

Sorry if this is way to technical.  I am very detailed when it comes to h…[Read more]

@warrenluther04 Here he is! What do you think?

Cole Avis:

As for your fanfiction, I think it might be okay to post it so long as you credit that it’s based off the Star Wars Universe. 😀 If you still have concerns, I’d ask @aratrea or @daeus about that.

@notawriter I totally agree!  Even in the New Testament in the “credits” sections of Paul’s letters there are some unusual names.  I mean, everyone’s heard of the name Aquila, but no one uses it because it sounds a little strange for a boy.

@warrioroftherealm I love making up words! (For instance, the character name topic I started.) How about smogis, longofay, caheloma, or jonjuke?  What type of culture is it?  That might have bearing on what kind of sounds they use in their language.

@warrioroftherealm

Caspin root.

Glaggun…

Hossrot root…

Letlest…

?? Any of those work?

@daeus Yes I agree. thanks!

I just realized another thing. I don’t like when flashbacks are used as plot devices to dump the reader info. But I enjoy seeing the flashback if I was already told the information. Sure, it seems like a waste of time to show if if ya already know it, but I think it can add a little bit of depth that way. Because the character has a flashback b…[Read more]

@waterlily Showing them in a “murkier” way might definitely help! I didn’t even think about changing the feel of it by taking advantage of the visual medium I’ll be using.
@livgiordano I think it is a good idea to have them shorter.. It would feel more natural 🙂 Love to hear your opinions on it from someone who enjoys it. Also glad that most…[Read more]

@inkling-for-christ I would work on developing the internal conflict before handling any exterior threats or things that happen. *shrugs*
Who is the main antagonist? Why? How does it relate to your MC in a painfully personal way?
After all, a story is just about the protagonist and how he grows to defeat the antagonist. But that can mean more…[Read more]

@jenwriter17 As others have said, 6 seems a tad bit cliche. But I hear legends of ways to fix it. Do the unexpected! *throws smoke bomb, leaving only a link to a KP article on cliche’s behind*
“Wait.. Why a smoke bomb? After reading the article, I could do better.”
*throws kitten bomb* Much better. Here’s a differant link to a differant KP article…[Read more]

@sage-g I actually own a few copic caios, though Im not too handy with them(they’re amazing tho) . @notawriter thought you did use some alcohol based markers, but the colors were way too light and blended for my eyes to believe it.
@mariposa The facial anatomy looks amazing!

@rochellaine Yes I’m planning on illustrating it once the writing is finished. I couldn’t do it atm  as I still have so much to learn before tackling it, but I thought it better to start with the writing of the story before mastering my art skills. I actually approached this project because I wanted to do something with my art. It’s like the…[Read more]

@dekreel, As I said in the first post, I don’t write fantasy.  🙂  I go for the classic and the realistic, not the fantastical and grotesque.  But then, that’s why I put the names out, right?  So people could use them in ways I couldn’t!

@dekreel, Ohhh, I don’t know!  If she’s a person, probably.  If she’s a normal animal like fox or tiger, probably again.  If she’s a strange creature with a lizard’s body, a cat’s legs, and a peacock tail – probably not!  🙂  But I don’t care what you use it for, I just care what my own impressions of her are.

@rochellaine  Again, I have NO idea who she will be. She might be human, she might be creature……… *shrug*

Would you WANT me to tell you who she is?

@itisastarrynight Wonderful!  Actually, I like sci-fi better than fantasy, so I do think your updated plot sounds more cool.  🙂

You do illustrations yourself?