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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 4 months, 1 week ago
That’s a perfect illustration of their relationship. XD
You draw horses so well! I lost my courage for horses a while ago. They’re so big! XD Anyway, Tug is beautiful.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
I know!!! And it doesn’t make any sense why not, unless they just wanted to emphasize a smaller circle of awesome characters.
And if they wanted a sweet, visible romance, Faramir and Eowyn are so incredibly perfect. We just listened to that part last night and I was half laughing half crying. But maybe it’s a mercy because they…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi posted an update 4 months, 2 weeks ago
I’m running.
Running.
I can’t think now.
The world spins around me.
I run.
Is it behind me or in front? Am I running away for going home? Breath clawing in and out, tearing at my throat. One foot before the other and the earth slides away. Sliding, blurring. Away.
Feet too fast. I’m flying now. It hits me.
I fell. See stars, black and white…[Read more] -
Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
Also….
Leon is oddly like Samwise.(Or at least, last I knew of him he was.) While their plotlines are pretty completely different, they have similar strength and weaknesses. Both react in anger when those love are threatened, and both struggle with hopelessness, unbelief, and selfishness. The difference is in direction. Leon lets his hurt and…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
Oh, funsies!
This is a great idea! XD Unfortunately, your characters are actually pretty unique, so finding a match here will take a bit.
Faramir and Beregond! My sister and I have been re-read/listening to the trilogy again and I had forgotten how much I liked Beregond. Ever noticed the illustration of…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
@loopylin @keilah-h @ellette-giselle
Leo
Leo was about to lead the way down the hall, when, with a flurry of wings Hunter appeared beside them.
Which nearly got the kid slammed by Rory, who waved instead. Strange, but then this place tended to put himself on edge, so…
For a moment the boy was lost somewhere else. Seeing something else. Then…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
Oh my. Those are stupendous. XD
I just knew he was doomed…Sorry y’all. II had homework ambush me. I’ll try to write an RP now.
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
@whalekeeper @ellette-giselle @calyhuge
I’m with Whaley. My current characters don’t tend to fight unless they have a personal reason for it (besides the fact that a real fight could put Leo out of his job and *backstory*)
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
Oh would you? *Raises eyebrows*
*Wondering how to get Leoron ready for this*
If a battle is to be started, I would like to ask that the bad guys not be invincible. That was the main problem with the early fights: the bad guys either always won, or left the good guys with hardly more than a moral victory (besides the…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
*Gasp*
Beautiful. Just beautiful.
Maybe he’d never fully heal.
But how wonderful it was to finally know that God was strong enough to carry even Riker’s most broken pieces.
This is quoting material.
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
Not quite lost. Real life is just taking most of my time. *Sigh*
I will try to check back here and RP later today.
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 2 weeks ago
@loopylin @keilah-h @ellette-giselle
Wait tool? *Immediately starts thinking Fork! Factory!*
Leo
The elevator doors slid open to reveal the upstairs hallway. A long line of red and blue doors stood before them. Leo turned left towards room 204 and its dead lightbulb.
“I need to go take care-”
“Lelo!” A high pitched wail sounded behind him. He…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
@loopylin @keilah-h @ellette-giselle
Poor Rory. XD
Leo
The poor kid’s face turned red as he dragged the toe of his shoe around and around. Eddie seemed to be trying to smother more laughter.
But there was something more than just embarrassment in Rory’s eyes. Leo decided to intervene. “If I had a bonny, I would not be taking her to see the…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 4 months, 3 weeks ago
Ahh! And the doggie! They look almost exactly how I imagine them. I loved those books.
Ugh. I just don’t like the fact that he killed Alice (and that he made pretty much all of his girls into the exact same fake “strong” characters, no matter how original their first introduction was. Take Cassandra for instance…)
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 4 months, 3 weeks ago
IT’S WILL.
And Shadow! And the infamous mandola!
He actually looks a lot like I imagine him. Wow. That’s very good.
Yeah, I haven’t finished the series either. Mostly because he killed my favorite character in the end and it didn’t even make sense. He should have just let her be and maybe taken the chance to write a healthy…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
@loopylin @keilah-h @ellette-giselle
Are the twins coming?
Leo
“Later, people.” Feather boy twirled away in a swirl of rose and gold.
How did someone say goodbye here again? Leo smiled and raised his hand in a halfhearted wave.
Nobody looked horrified, so at least he didn’t do something wrong. On second thought, each of these kids looked lik…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
Glad you like it! We shall try to post the next bit next week. 🙂
If anyone has any ideas, they can post them in this thread too. I think it’s unofficially dedicated to Kingdom Pen.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
I understand that. My sister and I found a folder full of old short stories from several years ago. My writing has come a long, long way, but at the same time I still have similar tendencies and character ideas.
I even illustrated the little things. XD I don’t do that now, but I intend to.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 months, 3 weeks ago
@ellette-giselle Finally got them in. ☝️ I found some typos last minute.
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Sounds like life lol, nice poem
Yeah, life can be rough sometimes. This year has felt like Micah 7:8 in more ways than one. XD I think this poem was kinda trauma processing for an accident I had a few months back. Glad you like it!
Oh, that’s a good bible verse. Sorry to hear about your accident! Are you ok now?
Eeek, I forgot the phone died before I sent in my response. Now it’s very late, but anyhoo,
I’m doing well. Basically, I met concrete and it was not polite. Thank the Lord, the only real injury was a broken bone in my hand. It’s almost normal now. 🙂
Girl that was beautiful
*totally NOT stalking you*
Thanks! XD