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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
So we could certainly use Barnes’s help.
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
It is a bit confusing. XD
I was taking them to Leo’s apartment (since the apartments have also been introduced before) to get them to a safe place where we can come up with a plan.
In order for Silvia, Quincy, and Rory to go back to school, we’re going to have to defeat/remove/in some way displace the Agents (and apparently for Leo…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Leo
He looked back over at Rory, a smile twitching his lips. The strain of carrying Quincy was obviously getting to him, but Leo hesitated to take back the small boy. Rory looked more like…himself with that small head tucked against his neck. More alive and real.
What had he asked?
“Ah. Not far, no.” But not…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Oops. Once again the amazingly brilliant Koshka forgets to complete and submit her RP. XD
Leo
The street was quiet, making him glanced at passing windows to watch their reflection.
Still no agents.
But his shoulders itched with the feeling of something just beyond perception. Irritating. He shoved his hands in…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 2 weeks ago
He has become his own character with his own separate struggles and personality. Plot wise? Yeah, it’s different.
If you mean you’re safe to start knocking them off…😎 Beware of repercussions. 😎
Just kidding. Do what is best for the story.
Oh goodness! I love that girl!!!
You know, she would be fun in a RP with my charrie…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 2 weeks ago
This is getting very interesting! I wonder what shenanigans will follow now they’re all together, yet I’m worried about who is getting struck next.
Amelia is a sweetheart with a spine of steel. I love when she’s on set.
One thing that caught me:
Joseph could still remember the way and rode eagerly along the streets until they…
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic You know you are a writer when… in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
I’m glad it’s a good one. I’ve imagined telling it to little kids at reenactments (Which is to say, I’ve imagined being in reenactments).
Crater Base sounds interesting! Sibling built stories are the best.
You know, we played some elaborate games with our dolls, Littlest Petshops, and LEGOs, but I think our stuffed animals were the…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
@freed_and_redeemed @whalekeeper
I wrote a happy scene and a rather sad scene. However, the happy scene would makes very little sense to anyone reading the story, so I’m sharing the sad one. XD
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There was too much silence in his room. Onnendel pushed himself up on his elbow to see over the mound of pillows. The sunlight that splashed across…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
@whalekeeper @freed_and_redeemed
I’ll take care of my 20 snowballs later, but I think I can get y’all’s two dusted off.
That is, if you want some backstory set up for our serial story that’s currently on pause. 🙂
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Wellllllllllllllllllllllllll…. XD
There was this truce thing going on.
I still have 10 snowballs available. I am saving them for instant defense against an attack.
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Koshka replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
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Koshka replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Oh dear. I think I’m going to go hide in the log cabin.
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Koshka replied to the topic Writing Characters of the Opposite Gender in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
I’m fine with women going into battle, as long as they dress, act, and fight like women (and the author doesn’t try to make some weird point out of it). It’s when girls start saying things like “I’m just as good as a guy” or “I’m better than any guy.” Because, while I believe that all people are in fact equal, what the author sounds like…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Oh! I like them. The first is very lonesome/dreamy, and the second does well painting its picture.
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Glad you like it! 😀
*ducks into fort*
*is defending herself with her arsenal of ten snowballs*
*and a golden tin of cookies*
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Koshka replied to the topic Do you celebrate Christmas? in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Ooooooo, looks sticky and sweet. Should be percent to feed to the little cousins come Christmas day.
*Grins*
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Hmmmmm.
Ok. I’m seeing a child soldier type. He’s got a past and he doesn’t care what he does because he doesn’t want to care. Yet he also feels he still has something to accomplish. He could be redeemable, or he could be an incredible thorn in the MC’s side. As for who he is… I don’t know. I think he was once connected to…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 2 weeks ago
Hmm. Well, he looks like an SC, maybe an anti-hero or antagonist, although I don’t know if he’s a villain.
Is he perchance the oldest of the street orphans?
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