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@felicity

I agree with Godly. You could do either! Yeah, you could have them escape right before they’re invaded, so you can have some action, but not make it super long. Personally, I really love long books! I will totally read yours when it’s published either way 😉😊. Just make sure it’s meaningful and inspirational!

@koshka

Here are some themes for my characters:

Ludwika: coming of age, taking responsibility for your actions, submitting to the authority in your life (her dad), learning who God is.

Nataliya: dealing with fear and grief, learning determination and loyalty.

Piotr: overcoming set backs in a mature way, (not acting out to get attention),…[Read more]

@felicity

Yes, we can! “Never ever, ever, ever, ever give up. Never ever, ever give up, no.” Those lyrics just came into my head!! I think their from a 4King and Country song that my sister listens to. 😀

Yes! I think that may be a 4King and Country song!! I LOVE 4King and Country! What’s your favorite song from them??

@godlyfantasy12

LOL I’ll respond in the other forumXD

@lightoverdarkness6

I love that! So beautiful. Don’t give up!! We can do it 😊😊!

Yes, we can! “Never ever, ever, ever, ever give up. Never ever, ever give up, no.” Those lyrics just came into my head!! I think their from a 4King and Country song that my sister listens to. 😀

@godlyfantasy12

*claps. Wipes eyes with hankie* Beautifully said? Bravissimo!

*humbly bows, hands you another tissue* More beautiful to write than to actually experience, ha ha! 😀

@mineralizedwritings

Hey I love helping people with plot issues! If you feel like sharing 😁 one of my favorite things in my book is trying to connect everything.

Thanks! I was telling Koshka a little about it if you want to give your thoughts…

And lol, your little speech about the land of unfulfilled dreams. I’ve been there before lol. I’m not…

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@koshka

*Loud, stormy applause*

*peeks out from behind piles of notebooks* Wait, someone’s clapping?

I’ve also just finished college finals for the year, so that’s a relief on time.

Congratulations! It must feel good to have them done.

I need to be more steady in my writing. Maybe that means better accountability, maybe that means working it in…

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@godlyfantasy12

Oof…thats rough with ya story friend 😅. Hey I’d be pleased as punch to try and help with your plot hole if ya like!

Oh yeah. Okay!! Thanks! I’ll lay it out here in just a sec 😊😉. Gotta finish math 😑😅.

@mineralizedwritings

Sorry about that! You’ll figure it out 😉

Yep! I’m sure I will…absolutely sure…in 5 years maybe! &#x1f…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

nothing wrong with being ambitious! It takes time to have a character develop properly, one new charrie per book sounds like a really good plan to widen the focus but not too much. Wow, 7-8 books! Sounds like a fun project! I’m trying to not let mine get too big, because I think I’ll get burnt out of the genre I’m working on if I…[Read more]

@sarafina

Yeah it was really cute!

That’s great! I used to want to have a giant family, with some of my kids and some adopted. It’s a bit undertaking, who now’s if I’ll still do that someday 😂

@sarafina

Lol that’s so cute! There was this little kid at our old church who would go around our girls youth cirlce and give us each a hug. 😆 then he’d go around the circle again… until people got annoyed 🤣

@godlyfantasy12

Yeah go do it! There’s nothing wrong with book hopping, I do it all the time. Is he from the same series as all your other charries, or do you have multiple series at once?

@esther-c

I’ve never heard if her. I’ll have to look her up!! I just recently found a music artist named Madylen Paige, and her songs are so good!!

Btw, I’ve had “I ain’t worried” in my head for the past like 2 days XD! Thx Everton! 🙂

@godlyfantasy12

Ugh PAXTON IS DARLING!!!!

😭😭😭

SO CUTE 🥰

@esther-c

I thought the faceclaim for Albert looked like Chris Hemsworth as well! 😆 I’ve never see .A Dog’s Purpose, but I’ve heard of it!

Thanks!! 😊

Yeah!@godlyfantasy12 yeah i think you’re right XD! It’s a great movie! (Especially since you love Dogs!! 🙂

You’re welcome!!

Ooh, I love the face claims for their fams!! They’re all so prett…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

I love it! Awesome themes. Poor November ahhhhh 😥!!

Jocelyns are interesting!

I see you have a lot of learning to love yourself, that’s such a great theme.

@koshka

Wow, those sound amazing! 🤩 Sounds like awesome WIP!

@keilah-h

Funny story, I couldn’t figure out the character’s name for the longest time. Then, while searching a naming website, I came across the name “Jareth,” which apparently means “descendant” or “next in line” and I loved it. The problem was, I wasn’t sure if my brother would, so I kept it in a list of names I liked and would just always…

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@lightoverdarkness6

Sorry about that! You’ll figure it out 😉

What is your idea for your new wip? And if you want to revive the other one, I’d be happy to provide some ideas for your plot issues! I would recommend trying to follow a plan, I’ve looked at both save the cat and the hero’s journey, my first book roughly follows the first one, and my…[Read more]