@spradlin
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic A letter for my story in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 5 months ago
The fact that he doesn’t hear whether or not she’s dead or alive before this letter, and doesn’t even try to find out, strikes me as odd, but I guess I could see a bully-type character being too embarrassed to do that and such. Anyways, onto the actual request, I’m going to try to put myself in the position of this character. Assuming that he…[Read more]
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BlueJay replied to the topic HALP! (Blog Titles Are Literally the Worst) in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 5 months ago
YOU MEAN WE MIGHT TAKE ALL THIS TIME TO THINK OF AN AWESOME IDEA TO HAVE IT NOT BE AVAILABLE????!!!! 😮 😮 😮 *FAINTS*
Um anyway, out of the two I think I like…*this is really hard*. I think I like notecards better, but I understand yours too. With notecards it kinda, might, sort of, drag the person in to your blog since they might be curious…[Read more] -
BlueJay replied to the topic A letter for my story in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 5 months ago
Another question to think about: How would you start your letter? “Dear”; “Hi”; “Chloe;” “Nothing, let’s just get down to business.”
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BlueJay replied to the topic A letter for my story in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 5 months ago
Another question to think about: How would you start your letter? “Dear”; “Hi”; “Chloe;” “Nothing, just let’s get down to business.”
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BlueJay replied to the topic HALP! (Blog Titles Are Literally the Worst) in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 5 months ago
You could just call it “Notecards” and play off the fact that you want people to note your cards. 😛
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BlueJay replied to the topic HALP! (Blog Titles Are Literally the Worst) in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 5 months ago
*beats head on wall too* (Have you seen “Big Hero Six”?) Cause I feel like Hiro right now. *Stupid empty head*
It’s kinda like the title “Bubble Trouble”. It has a nice ring to it. Maybe you need something to rhyme with staccato.
*Rubs temples* I’ll get back to you later. I’m going to go and do some more serious thinking. -
Faith Kindred replied to the topic HALP! (Blog Titles Are Literally the Worst) in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 5 months ago
That’s not a bad idea. Not that I didn’t like the whole staccato thing, but it wasn’t really getting you anywhere. 😛 Uh…let me see…Noted Musings (sorta bland, but it could work). Actually, I liked your idea of Noteworthy Musings. 😉 Haha… umm… Mixed Notes? Index Madness…? 😉 😛
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Faith Kindred replied to the topic HALP! (Blog Titles Are Literally the Worst) in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 5 months ago
That’s not a bad idea. Not that I didn’t like the whole staccato thing, but it wasn’t really getting you anywhere. 😛 Uh…let me see…Noted Musings (sorta bland, but it could work). Actually, I liked your idea of Noteworthy Musings. 😉 Haha… umm… Mixed Notes? Index Madness… 😉 😛 Ugh, someone, please put me out of my misery.
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BlueJay replied to the topic A letter for my story in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 5 months ago
Yes it does.
Joshua is fifteen. Actually Joshua is not the type to apologize. He delights in being mean (you know, the bully in school) He does it for fun for himself, though his intentions are never to hurt. So he gets pretty shaken up when Chloe is hit by the car.
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Faith Kindred replied to the topic HALP! (Blog Titles Are Literally the Worst) in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 5 months ago
The Author’s Staccato(s), maybe? 😛 Uh… Staccato… Umm… Wow. 😐 I’ve been reading this topic for a while now, and let me just say – @spradlin, I totally get why you’re beating your head against the wall. This is insanely hard (and I only just started 😛 🙁 )
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Faith Kindred replied to the topic HALP! (Blog Titles Are Literally the Worst) in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 5 months ago
The Author’s Staccato(s), maybe? 😛 Uh… Staccato… Umm… Wow. -_- I’ve been reading this topic for a while now, and let me just say – @spradlin, I totally get why you’re beating your head against the wall. This is insanely hard (and I only just started 😛 🙁 )
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BlueJay replied to the topic HALP! (Blog Titles Are Literally the Worst) in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 5 months ago
How about:
Sarah’s Staccato Notes
Noted Staccatos
Notes of Staccato
Spradlin’s Staccato Notes
Super Staccato Notes
Any of these feeling a bit better? :} -
BlueJay replied to the topic HALP! (Blog Titles Are Literally the Worst) in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 5 months ago
Sweet Staccatos?
I think Staccato Notes would work well too. 😛 -
BlueJay replied to the topic A letter for my story in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 5 months ago
So let’s get some guys onto this topic. *Stares hard at them* I’m stuck. 🙁 And I’m dying to find out how my story ends. HELP!!
@aratrea
@dbhgodreigns
@lightningmouse
@levipierpont
@markmcguire
@daniel-leinad-thompson-2-2-2
@reaganramm
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BlueJay replied to the topic HALP! (Blog Titles Are Literally the Worst) in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 5 months ago
Whoa! I LOVE that idea. @spradlin. I love sing Staccato. It is really fun and uses a lot of tummy muscles. Do you sing? I do. I’m in the soprano range which is very special. (I just have to remember to practise.)
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Little Problem Here in the forum Poetry Critiques 10 years, 5 months ago
Hey, who says you can’t be willing to die for frozen raspberries @Daeus!?!? Why else do you think they say ‘to die for’?
😛
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BlueJay replied to the topic HALP! (Blog Titles Are Literally the Worst) in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 5 months ago
Sticky Notes.
Notes of Harmony
Whole Notes
Notes from a Composer
(So those above involve music. I’ll see if I can think of some different ones later) 😀 -
Faith Kindred replied to the topic Let's write a story! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years, 5 months ago
I fake a laugh. This guy is really getting on my nerves. “Yep, that’s what it is alright.”
He ducks back through the door and a moment later it expands into normal height.
“Voila!” I see him through the doorway with his hands raised triumphantly.
“H-how did you…the door…it just…”
He shrugs. “No biggie. Actually it’s pretty easy to use magic…[Read more] -
BlueJay posted an update 10 years, 5 months ago
“I am only one;
but still I am one.I cannot do everything,
but still I can do something.I will not refuse to do something
I can do.”-Helen Keller
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BlueJay replied to the topic A letter for my story in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 5 months ago
No. Re-phrase it should be nearly 8pm not 7pm.
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Awesome quote, Tessa! Helen Keller was an absolutely amazing person. 🙂
Thanks Greta. Yes, I absolutely agree with you. She was extremely amazing. I sometimes wonder if I would have been able to copy with it all.
That is so powerful!
Thank Ingrid. It’s great encouragement to me.