Sarah Spradlin

@bluejay will respond tomorrow.

I don’t mean to nag (honest) but still a bit stuck even after lightningmouse and Josiah have help. I’ve got a better idea of what I’m wanting but if you have any more input, I would really love it.

@daeus

@faithdk I’ve reached 7,630 words. Which takes my story out of the short story category and makes it a novellette. 😀 Now, it go back through and refine it. *Stares at story* This might take sometime. 😀 *Such fun*

Believe it or not, @bluejay, I have no idea. 😛 Fine excuse for an Ohioan I make. 😉

Now I envy you @faithdk. All I can write are short stories. 😛

@daeus how close is Upper Arlington to Centerburg? or @kate-flournoy 😀

@writefury, thanks for your suggestion. 🙂 I’ve written a short story once but, honestly, they aren’t really my thing. 😛 I guess they’re just short (I know, that’s the point. 😛 Haha. 😉 ). But I’ve always liked longer stories. And, for me, short stories are so difficult to write! I know…weird 😛
And yes, I agree. Not planning is really where…[Read more]

@writefury, thanks for your suggestion. 🙂 I’ve written a short story once but, honestly, they aren’t really my thing. 😛 I guess they’re just short (I know, that’s the point. 😛 Haha. 😉 ). But I’ve always liked longer stories. And this may come as a shock, but for me, short stories are sorta difficult to write. I know…weird :’D But it’s true, for me.

I’ll be writing for 45 minutes if anyone else is interested in tagging along.

Yes @jadamae. I was tossing up between Pennsylvania and Indiana, and went with the later and forgot to remove your tag. Thanks anyway. 😀

Thanks @writefury. 😛

@mas410, Really?!?! That’s so cool! You’ll have to refresh my memory; where have we met before? I’m sure I’ll remember…I’m kind of having a brain-foggy day. 😉

Wonderful @spradlin!

Though I have a hard time imagining a bard singing something like this in a tavern… more like at a funeral. 😛

My assorted thoughts on this piece:
-As I said in my critique, the humor in this story is great and is still great this time around. Thumbs up from me for that.
-I second most of what other people have already said about the debit card and ticks.
-I really liked the parallels you were drawing between Anna and Savanna in terms of the spectrum…[Read more]

“Now what it the capital of Australia?”
“Um…” Chloe eyes glanced everywhere frantically. She hadn’t remembered studying anything about Australia. She didn’t even know where it was. She glanced at the boy in front of her. He was tapping the back of his jumper which had the names of all the students in her grade. ‘Sydney.’
“Sydney,” she…[Read more]

“Now what it the capital of Australia?”
“Um…” Chloe eyes glanced everywhere frantically. She hadn’t remembered studying anything about Australia. She didn’t even know where it was. She glanced at the boy in front of her. He was tapping the back of his jumper which had the names of all the students in her grade. ‘Sydney.’
“Sydney,” she…[Read more]

“Now what it the capital of Australia?”
“Um…” Chloe eyes glanced everywhere frantically. She hadn’t remembered studying anything about Australia. She didn’t even know where it was. She glanced at the boy in front of her. He was tapping the back of his jumper which had the names of all the students in her grade. ‘Sydney.’
“Sydney,” she…[Read more]

So I kinda want a title that plays off of the notecards and metaphors; preferably kinda short.
*sarah, you should give yourself a pat on the back as you were the one who gave me the idea. 😀

Yay! So glad I could help Sarah. *Cries tears of joy*

Yay! Congrats! 😀 And good job with the name @bluejay! It’s simple, to the point, and overall just great. 🙂

Yay! Congrats! 😀 And great job with the name @bluejay!