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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Faith and Prayer in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 1 month ago
Ooh, good discussion @Corissa-Maiden-of-Praise. I haven’t done a lot of thinking on this, but the first thing that popped into my head when I read your post was this verse:
The horse is prepared for the day of battle, but deliverance is of the Lord.
Proverbs 21:31Quite simply, we are instructed to prepare and leave the rest to God. As @Hope is…[Read more]
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Corissa Maiden of Praise replied to the topic Faith and Prayer in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 1 month ago
Okay, I’m going to present some different viewpoints; I’m not saying I agree with them, I’m just saying I’ve heard them used and I’m curious how you will respond to them.
@hope Christ says in Mark 11:24, “Therefore I say unto you, What things soever ye desire, when ye pray, believe that ye receive them, and ye shall have them.” He’s obviously not…[Read more]
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BlueJay replied to the topic Faith and Prayer in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 1 month ago
@corissa-maiden-of-praise
*this is a quote* “I heard a story once about two farmers who desperately need rain. And they both prayed to God for it. But only one went out and prepared his fields for it. Which one do you think trust God to send the rain?” (This is from Facing the Giants) 🙂Is constantly praying for something a lack of faith? God…[Read more]
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BlueJay replied to the topic Faith and Prayer in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 1 month ago
@corissa-maiden-of-praise
*this is a quote* “I heard a story once about two farmers who desperately need rain. And they both prayed to God for it. But only one went out and prepared his fields for it. Which one do you think trust God to send the rain?” (This is from Facing the Giants) 🙂Is constantly praying for something a lack of faith? God…[Read more]
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Hope Ann replied to the topic Faith and Prayer in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 1 month ago
@corissa-maiden-of-praise Ooo, that is a tough question. Hmmm…
I could argue for both sides, so I guess I’ll start by asking is it a Biblical idea that preparing for an answer to prayer is a sign of faith. Or is it a sign of presumption?
I’ve not studied this but I think assuming the answer is a bit presumptuous. After all, when we’re asking…[Read more]
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Corissa Maiden of Praise started the topic Faith and Prayer in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 1 month ago
I’ve had some difficult questions pop up lately, and I’m wondering what kind of answers you all will come up with. There is not necessarily a right or wrong answer for this, I’m just curious to see what other people think about it.
If you pray for something, but are prepared in case the answer is no, are you demonstrating wisdom in preparation or…[Read more]
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ClaireC replied to the topic Those Dear, Fuzzy Angels in the forum Short Story Critiques 10 years, 1 month ago
@ingridrd, @corissa-maiden-of-praise, @christi-eaton, @winter-rose, @emma-flournoy, @gretald. Thank you so much for the feedback! Wow, I can’t believe it affected you guys so much. I didn’t really think it was that great, but I am so glad that you all liked it! 🙂 @corissa-maiden-of-praise, I used the internet for a little bit of information on…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Those Dear, Fuzzy Angels in the forum Short Story Critiques 10 years, 1 month ago
@ClaireC please don’t think I’m ignoring you. I’ll read this eventually; it’s just I’m incredibly busy lately and don’t have time for much extra. When I do read it, you may be sure I’ll tell you what I think. 😉
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Those Dear, Fuzzy Angels in the forum Short Story Critiques 10 years, 1 month ago
@ClairC please don’t think I’m ignoring you. I’ll read this eventually; it’s just I’m incredibly busy lately and don’t have time for much extra. When I do read it, you may be sure I’ll tell you what I think. 😉
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Greta replied to the topic Announcing… Jess! in the forum Start HERE 10 years, 1 month ago
@Jess I’m contemplating reading it as well. Right now, I’m in the middle of reading the Fellowship of the Ring for the third time. 😉
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Greta replied to the topic Those Dear, Fuzzy Angels in the forum Short Story Critiques 10 years, 1 month ago
@clairec Wow, I loved it! Great with the characters and the story! Keep writing because you’ve got a gift from God. 😉
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Those Dear, Fuzzy Angels in the forum Short Story Critiques 10 years, 1 month ago
Oh, that’s sweet. 🙂
I read the poem—nice job with his thoughts in the story matching the sentiments expressed in the poem. -
Corissa Maiden of Praise's profile was updated 10 years, 1 month ago
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Corissa Maiden of Praise replied to the topic Those Dear, Fuzzy Angels in the forum Short Story Critiques 10 years, 1 month ago
Excellent! Well written, and in a way that visualizing the scenes was not hard at all. I could almost taste the dust at the ranch, see the joy mingled with sorrow on his mother’s face as he grew, and feel the tension as Bert reached for his gun. That is one of the best signs of a good writer in my opinion. 😉
*goes and reads poem* 🙂
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Ingrid replied to the topic Those Dear, Fuzzy Angels in the forum Short Story Critiques 10 years, 1 month ago
@clairec
*exhales shakily* *sniffs and blinks back tears* This is so moving and VERY well written. I’d have to agree with @Bluejay; I was so absorbed in the story that I didn’t have time to cry! I was tearing up, though. Excellent job on the characters. Nothing to critique. Amazing job, Claire! 🙂And I just read the poem… 🙂
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Ingrid replied to the topic Those Dear, Fuzzy Angels in the forum Short Story Critiques 10 years, 1 month ago
@clairec
*exhales shakily* *sniffs and blinks back tears* This is so moving and VERY well written. I’d have to agree with @Bluejay; I was so absorbed in the story that I didn’t have time to cry! I was tearing up, though. Excellent job on the characters. Nothing to critique. Amazing job, Claire! 🙂 -
ClaireC replied to the topic Those Dear, Fuzzy Angels in the forum Short Story Critiques 10 years, 1 month ago
@sarah-h, Interestingly, not many people do know much about Australian history…a lot of Australians included!! I don’t know a huge amount either. I know the basics, but I only know about, um, *scratches head* maybe 3? of our prime ministers. So, yeah. 😉 I only know a lot about the Pacific War (the Pacific in WWII) because that’s what my current…[Read more]
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ClaireC replied to the topic Bible Challenge in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 1 month ago
@sarah-h. Great! I suppose we just need to keep striving through the Lord’s strength. It’s nice to be able to do it with someone else!
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ClaireC replied to the topic Those Dear, Fuzzy Angels in the forum Short Story Critiques 10 years, 1 month ago
@bluejay, Wow! I can’t believe it nearly moved you to tears. I’m really glad you liked it! 😛 (Oh, bother, here we go again!)
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