Sarah Spradlin

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@overcomer We’ve a topic for this, so head on over and join in. We are studying the first two chapters. 🙂

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@overcomer We’ve a topic for this, so on over and join in. We are studying the first two chapters. 🙂

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@overcomer We’ve a topic for this, so on over and join in. We are studying the first two chapters. 🙂

Is it too late to join? because I can’t resist. I love The Hobbit too much! Please say yes!!! @bluejay

@overcomer Thanks. I think I’ve changed “shiny” but I’ll go and check. 🙂

I like this too, @bluejay . 🙂 Cool poem!

I agree with @jess about changing “shiny” though. It does stick out just a bit. “Clear” like she suggested might be nice.

I don’t think I’d change anything else. Well done! 🙂

I agree with @jada-mae that you need a little more information here. What is the goal of the story? Yes, she wants to, and gets to be, and army nurse, (probably don’t want to give away the part about her getting what she wants) but why must she destroy the contents of the mysterious safe? Why her? I think there needs to be more information…[Read more]

I suppose I could always try the balancing thing and just cut out the omniscient parts later if they don’t work out …

Ugh, I got a little writing done, but … I’m gum-stuck in the details.

I can’t decide whether to use a balance of Third Person Omniscient and Third Person Limited, (I mean having a sort of background narrator who puts in a little introduction at the beginnings of scenes/chapters, and who then defers to his characters’ own points of view sort…[Read more]

Ugh, I got a little writing done, but … I’m gum-stuck in the details.

I can’t decide whether to use a balance of Third Person Omniscient and Third Person Limited, (I mean having a sort of background narrator who puts in a little introduction at the beginnings of scenes/chapters, and who then defers to his characters’ own points of view sort…[Read more]

Ugh, I got a little writing done, but … I’m gum-stuck in the details.

I can’t decide whether to use a balance of Third Person Omniscient and Third Person Limited, (I mean having a sort of background narrator who puts in a little introduction at the beginnings of scenes/chapters, and who then defers to his characters’ own points of view sort…[Read more]

@bluejay I’m a dragon, what would you expect? I’m a rare species of monstrous nightmare mixed with a night fury. 🙂
I’m allergic to B-calm tablets, doctor…can I take some Vitamin C (chocolate) and maybe Vitamin A-nger?

@bluejay I’m a dragon, what would you expect? I’m a rare version of monstrous nightmare mixed with a night fury. 🙂
I’m allergic to B-calm tablets, doctor…can I take some Vitamin C (chocolate) and maybe Vitamin A-nger?

@dragon-snapper WHAT!!!!!!???????????!!!!!!!!!!!! I didn’t write anything, but I didn’t throw a fit. You need to take a few of my B-calm tablets. (I’m sure I’ve mentioned them before) Oh, yes. When everyone was having untimely deaths. *shakes head sadly and starts to repair the damaged chairs and phones*

@jess I love your tactic!

Very funny @daeus … 😛 Unfortunately, dragons don’t keep pocket knives or wooden blocks. Our talons are our knives and wooden blocks are usually used for fire-breathing target practice…any other suggestions???
On note of writer’s block, I did terribly…I wrote a grand total of one sentence and ended up deleting 2,500 because I really, really…[Read more]

@daeus I shall have use that suggestion. Cause I got writer’s block too. *grunts in annoyance* But the trouble is I don’t have a pocket knife. *walks away trying to think of a new idea.*

@daeus I shall have to take up that suggestion. Cause I got writer’s block too. *grunts in annoyance* But the trouble is I don’t have a pocket knife. *walks away trying to think of a new idea.*

Oh help…I have writer’s block…