@spradlin
Active 8 years, 6 months ago- Rank: Loyal Sidekick
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Evil Poem in the forum Poetry Critiques 9 years, 12 months ago
Anne!!!! You came to KP!!! Oh my goodness why did you have to do it while I was on vacation I haven’t properly welcomed you and this is terrible oh dear!!
So first of all— WELCOME TO KINGDOM PEN, @ANNE-OF-LOTHLORIEN!!Yes. So now that that’s out of the way… I really like your poem. I agree with the comments about the rhythm— it does seem to…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Structure and Character Arcs in the forum Characters 9 years, 12 months ago
Ooh, such a lovely topic! @Mark-Kamibaya thanks for starting it. I missed it initially because I’m on vacation and wifi is spotty, but you may rest assured I have not abandoned the forum. 😉
As for my favorite structure/arc… well, it really depends. I don’t think I have an absolute favorite. The two I primarily use are Hero’s Journey and…[Read more] -
ClaireC replied to the topic Prayer Requests in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 12 months ago
Gasp! @spradlin, Sorry! 🙂 I know you don’t really mind, but as a note that I forgot to mention at the beginning of the topic, If someone doesn’t tag you, don’t be offended. 🙂 *looks suspiciously at you* *suspicious look changes to one of concern* *runs over and thanks you* 😉
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 12 months ago
@daeus I’m going to go now. I wrote 160 words to one story and 138 on another. Thanks!
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BlueJay replied to the topic A Tale From Two Views in the forum Poetry 9 years, 12 months ago
Psst @sarah-h Here’s the poem for the third list. Please feel free to critique. (just technically I think I did a terrible job, but….)
One day when I was gregarious,
And we were all being very rampageous,
An indigenous to Australia stood and said,
“I think that we are being loutish,
Or extremely ostentatious.
Perhaps we should be quiet
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 12 months ago
@dragon-snapper It will be @daeus
@daeus I’m leaving now. Good-bye. I got a poem written, only I don’t think it’s very good, but never mind. *waves farewell* -
BlueJay replied to the topic Prayer Requests in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 12 months ago
@clairec Will do. 🙂
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ClaireC replied to the topic Prayer Requests in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 12 months ago
I’ll start.
I’m one of the crew for a Kid’s bible club at our church these school holidays (in Australia)
Among many things, I’m a small group leader, I’m playing Mary Magdalene in our skit (and I have the responsibility of presenting the gospel message in that) and I’m leading the memory verse on the guitar. Please pray that God would give me…[Read more] -
ClaireC replied to the topic Prayer Requests in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 12 months ago
@bluejay, wow! Thank you! 🙂
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Snapper replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 12 months ago
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BlueJay replied to the topic Prayer Requests in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 12 months ago
@clairec Sure.
@graciekry @his-instrument @jess @the-happy-bookaholic @timothy-young @warrioroftherealm @emma-flournoy @winter-rose @christi-eaton @aysia-serene @adry_grace @belegteleri @vanna @faithdk @jadamae @hislittlerose @hannah-krynicki @writefury @hannah-olsen @zoe-wingfeather @dbhgodreigns @wordfitlyspoken @hannah-c @spradlin @ivy-rose @ro…[Read more] -
ClaireC started the topic Prayer Requests in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 12 months ago
Write your prayer request and tag at least 5 people to pray for you (so someone definitely sees it.) If you’re tagged as a pray-er then add that person’s request to your personal list, and pray faithfully for them. And prayer-requester, don’t forget to notify your pray-ers when your request is answered, even if it’s not answered in the way you…[Read more]
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ClaireC started the topic Prayer Requests in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 12 months ago
Write your prayer request and tag at least 5 people to pray for you (so someone definitely sees it.) If you’re tagged as a pray-er then add that person’s request to your personal list, and pray faithfully for them. And prayer-requester, don’t forget to notify your pray-ers when your request is answered, even if it’s not answered in the way you…[Read more]
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 12 months ago
@daeus I’ll be going for another half hour. (but then I shall have to leave) 🙂 See you then.
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 12 months ago
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ClaireC replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 12 months ago
@bluejay, Sorry I can’t!:( Oh the curse of Schoolwork!! *Screams in desperation* And sorry I missed you yesterday, too. Somehow the notification slipped past without my seeing it! 🙁 I’ll tag you next time I’m writing. Oh, and you can provide the snacks. You are now the official KP doctor and snack-provider. I guess you’ll have to team up with @dae…[Read more]
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 12 months ago
@sarah-h (fingers crossed that you’re still here) @clairec, @daeus, @overcomer. @jess, @winter-rose, @dragon-snapper, I am writing for half an hour. Can anyone, if not all of you, join me??? 🙂 🙂
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 12 months ago
@sarah-h (fingers crossed that you’re still here) @clairec, @daeus, @overcomer. @jess, @winter-rose, I am writing for half an hour. Can anyone, if not all of you, join me??? 🙂 🙂
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ClaireC replied to the topic Chatter in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 12 months ago
@sarah-h, that is very exciting! 🙂 My family and I will be praying for him.
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BlueJay replied to the topic The Hobbit in the forum Book Discussions 9 years, 12 months ago
@graciekry @his-instrument @jess @clairec @the-happy-bookaholic @dragon-snapper @timothy-young @warrioroftherealm @winter-rose @ingridrd @aysia-serene @adry_grace @daeus @belegteleri @hope @overcomer @vanna @faithdk @kate-flournoy @jadamae @hislittlerose @hannah-krynicki @writefury @hannah-olsen @dbhgodreigns @wordfitlyspoken @hannah-c @spradlin @i…[Read more]
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