Sarah Spradlin

Well if one more welcome won’t hurt then I’ll add mine too. Welcome to KP @brandon-miller And if that welcome did hurt you, you can see my because I am the doctor on the KP forum.
*rushes to @kate-flournoy* Are you hurt? That crash sound terrible from outside.

*rushes in late, crashes into chair and catches breath* Well, seems like you’ve already been sufficiently welcomed @Brandon-Miller, but I guess one more won’t hurt. So— welcome to the bestestist place on the internet. Yes. I know you’ve already been introduced to the word. 😀
Seems like you fit right in. We’re all mad here. *Cheshire cat grin*…[Read more]

@Brandon-Miller
It was nice to be able to root for the main character and support his moral actions in a film without compromising my own!

*gasp* I know EXACTLY what you mean!!!

Oh, welcome to Kingdom Pen. 😀 The more comedians the better. Oh, and do you live in the Ohio midwest?

Sounds grandtistic, @aella. 😉 My planning is…coming. Kind of. I have the novellet outlined, but the plot of the novella is eluding me right now. I’m working on it though, so hopefully I’ll have a basic outline figured out this week. (though I’ve been telling myself that the past three weeks so we’ll see…)

Welcome @brandon-miller! Ooo, I like Air Force One too. Harrison Ford is a great actor, and I generally like the characters he places. 🙂

@brandon-miller
Hey!!! *waves enthusiastically* A hundred welcomes! Can’t wait to get to know you better.

@Brandon-miller Have I established we’re crazy yet?

@daeus *bows* Why thank you. And yes, the ‘i’ does belong at the end, but if you want to add some ‘Daeus flare’ go ahead. 😉
And also, about my crazy words, incredamazing and fantasgreat belong to a few shows I’ve watched, so don’t give me all the credit. I just changed them up a bit. *evil grin* And also, we can just use any adjective we want to…[Read more]

@brandon-miller
Hey! Howdy! Hello! Greetings! Salutations! Welcome, welcome, welcome to…*pauses for dramatic effect* THE BESTISTEST PLACE ON THE INTERNET! Like @dragon-snapper said, we’re all pretty crazy here. 🙂
Ohhhhh, cool! I’ve always wanted to do OYAN, but I’ve never quite gotten around to it. Would you recommend it (most of the…[Read more]

😀 :p I figured that if other people stole bestestiest or whatever it is, then I can have my own word. Like we established, crazy.

@Brandon-miller
Howdy! Comedian, eh? Well, I’ll have you know that I’m a freelance comedian. (Not like Tim Hawkins, if anyone knows who he is. Anyone?) I just like to make people laugh. Things like that. 😀
@daeus is right. We’re all craaaaazzzyy! We come in all shapes and sizes too! I’m a dragon, others are unicorns, some are notorious for being…[Read more]

@Brandon-miller
Howdy! Comedian, eh? Well, I’ll have you know that I’m a freelance comedian. (Not like Tim Hawkins, if anyone knows who he is. Anyone?) I just like to make people laugh. Things like that. 😀
@daeus is right. We’re all craaaaazzzyy! We come in all shapes and sizes too! I’m a dragon, others are unicorns, some are notorious for being…[Read more]

@Aella— yeah. What @Daeus said. 😉

@Michael-Stanton now that you mention it, I thought of something that would help a technological dinosaur like me find their way around the forum more easily. In the first days of the forum, there used to be a little sidebar on the bottom right with all the newly replied-to topics listed. Something like that would save a lot of time digging…[Read more]

@Micheal-Stanton now that you mention it, I thought of something that would help a technological dinosaur like me find their way around the forum more easily. In the first days of the forum, there used to be a little sidebar on the bottom right with all the newly replied-to topics listed. Something like that would save a lot of time digging…[Read more]

Well, going back to read that part again, it does look more like she’s a child. 🙂 @Rolena-Hatfield

Heh. What they said, @Rolena-Hatfield. 😛
The story itself was engaging (and intriguing!!), but I noticed lots of structural issues, most noticeably past and present tense intermingled, and missing commas. Many words that could be switched around and/or changed for clearer meaning and smoother reading, too.

Also, the last sentence—I would say…[Read more]

Man, everyone got here before I did and said everything already… *sniff*
@Rolena-Hatfield this is really some great stuff here— love the very subtle yet distinct tone of the story. The one thing I noticed that no one else pointed out is that you tend to use this sentence structure a lot: ‘Doing something, he something somethingly…[Read more]

I love this! Very creative. Just a couple things I noticed…

The low lightening in the room cast shadows over his face when he leaned forward making him look very dark.

I believe you meant ‘lighting’ not ‘lightening’. 🙂

He confidence made my heart tremble.

His confidence.

I really need the money.

I think you unintentionally switched from…[Read more]