@spradlin
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Snapper replied to the topic Coarse language in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 9 months ago
@daeus On concern of replacement words, just use things that people might say that fits their personality. So, if a villain were saying it, he’d probably use something closer to ‘rats’ or something like that. If a hero were saying it, he’d probably end up saying ‘Grumpy giraffes.’
Sure thing, @daeus. 😀
@warrioroftherealm Don’t worry, I know…[Read more]
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Snapper replied to the topic Coarse language in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 9 months ago
@daeus On concern of replacement words, just use things that people might say that fits their personality. So, if a villain were saying it, he’d probably use something closer to ‘rats’ or something like that. If a hero were saying it, he’d probably end up saying ‘Grumpy giraffes.’
Sure thing, @daeus. 😀
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #3 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 9 months ago
@Daeus just thought I’d let you know I won’t be write-a-thoning tomorrow— no success hunting today, so I’m going out again tomorrow. I did get lots of outlining done though. 😉
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writers' Corner #3 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 9 months ago
Now??? @winter-rose. Send your email address to @spradlin and she’ll forward it onto me (please Sarah) and then I’ll send through the story to you. Does that suit?
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Emma Flournoy posted an update 9 years, 9 months ago
@Rolena-Hatfield Hey, I really appreciate you. 😀 You always seem so happy and friendly no matter what you’re talking about, and I love seeing the emphasis you’ve put in some of your posts on honoring parents.
It’s really inspiring to see someone who acts with such lovely character all the time; sometimes convicting, too. 😛 Thanks so much for…[Read more] -
Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Coarse language in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 9 months ago
@Daeus Oh cool! An audio of your own book…that’d be exciting.
I know what you’re saying about a person reading the whole book as opposed to an actor representing the specific character, but I don’t think the issue of the person reading the book for the audio is the only problem. I thought it might be bad if the word was said out loud at all,…[Read more]
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writers' Corner #3 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 9 months ago
@winter-rose I’m done editing. It was good to get that out of the way, although I’m at a bit of a sticky spot as I’m unsure what to do with it now. If you care to read it I could always use new beta readers… 🙂
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BlueJay replied to the topic Fruits of the Spirit in the forum Poetry Critiques 9 years, 9 months ago
Thanks @nataliemarie it has just been published on KP if you want to see it in its proper shape. 🙂
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writers' Corner #3 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 9 months ago
@winter-rose I’ve got some editing to do, so I can join you. 🙂
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Coarse language in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 9 months ago
@Daeus I would never read a curse word from a script, whether play or book. Something you could consider (though it’s kinda minor) about whether or not to put the words in your writing is, what if someone were to make an audiobook or movie out of your story (pretend for a minute that’s likely to happen. 😛 Ya never know!), they’d have to say the…[Read more]
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Snapper replied to the topic Coarse language in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 9 months ago
“”2. What words are you using? The D-word, or something worse? I would say that the D-word is the one word that is the least bad of all the cuss words that exist (not saying that it’s right, but that it is not as terrible as saying the S-word or something). “”
No, it’s not right, and it’s not as harsh as other words, but r…[Read more]
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Snapper replied to the topic Coarse language in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 9 months ago
2. What words are you using? The D-word, or something worse? I would say that the D-word is the one word that is the least bad of all the cuss words that exist (not saying that it’s right, but that it is not as terrible as saying the S-word or something).
No, it’s not right, and it’s not as harsh as other words, b…
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Snapper replied to the topic Coarse language in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 9 months ago
2. What words are you using? The D-word, or something worse? I would say that the D-word is the one word that is the least bad of all the cuss words that exist (not saying that it’s right, but that it is not as terrible as saying the S-word or something).
No, it’s not right, and it’s not as harsh as other words, but r…
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Snapper replied to the topic Coarse language in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 9 months ago
2. What words are you using? The D-word, or something worse? I would say that the D-word is the one word that is the least bad of all the cuss words that exist (not saying that it’s right, but that it is not as terrible as saying the S-word or something).
No, it’s not right, and it’s not as harsh as other words, but r…
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic So, um, "hi" guys in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 9 months ago
@NatalieMarie Neato.
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Hey Guys, Hi, um…. in the forum Start HERE 9 years, 9 months ago
@Leumeister How long have you been writing?
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Coarse language in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 9 months ago
@Daeus hm, yeah. That’s a puzzler. I would probably not do that, for the sake of my conscience and because I wouldn’t want to get accustomed to having bad words on my lips, even if they aren’t mine.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Coarse language in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 9 months ago
@Daeus true. I guess I meant more that to acknowledge their existence by saying ‘he cursed’ is not the same as actually putting all the lurid details down on the page.
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Louise Fowler are now friends 9 years, 9 months ago - Load More

@Rolena-Hatfield I didn’t say something wrong did I? Of course an answer isn’t required, but I wondered… 😉
@emma-flournoy Oh Emma! For some reason I wasn’t notified of your first (really sweet 😉 ) comment! Of course you didn’t say something wrong! That’s very sweet of you to say and encouraging. Honoring my parents is sooooo important to me (as it should be) but very difficult to do sometimes. My posts have even been convicting to me. (I said this I…[Read more]
@Rolena-Hatfield Whew! I didn’t think there was anything there you would have taken offense at…certainly not. 😛 I thought it might have been malfunctioning notifications, but wasn’t sure. Mebbe I just should’ve tagged you again, instead of making you think I was afraid I’d offended you. *sheepish grin*
Anyway, you are so welcome; you’re such a…[Read more]