Sarah Spradlin

@that_writer_girl_99 And even after all that, I forgot to tag you. 😛

I’m not sure what others said, but this is my review.
I really love this! The whole thing, especially the plot. The idea is great, and I cannot wait to see what happens next. But as for my critical side. If you feel as if I am melting your work, please tell me. I don’t want to be too mean. 😀

This is the life I wish I had. This is the normal…

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@That_Writer_Girl_99 um… Kara? *scrunches her eyes up* Shortish light brown hair… plain face that could be pretty if she smiled… (like most faces. 😀 ) fairly big eyes that are probably somewhere between blue and grey… almost blunt nose… probably fairly large-boned when it comes to build, but not particularly big. She looks bookish to…[Read more]

@that_writer_girl_99 😀 Don’t worry. Dragons don’t like rebellions.

@that_writer_girl_99 @theliterarycrusader Looks like I chose our king well. You all are very loyal. 😛 (maybe I won’t go to forum prison for the insurrection.)

@northerner You can take me to prison now. *holds out talons and wings for handcuffs* *resolves that they won’t take her without a fight*

@theliterarycrusader Ah…yeah. I was totally in charge of the insurrection.

@f5a8c3e92 Huh, guess I haven’t heard that word enough, and ‘pried’ would work too. 😛
Oh, and I see now how that means only Sawyer, but that was definitely not my first thought.

@daeus @jenali I’m signing off as well. I wrote 1100 words, and conquered a rough spot in the running of the plot. for the most part, I’m happy with what I got done.

@daeus Coolio.

@daeus I found your conflict. Work is getting in the way of writing.

@daeus Ooh, nice. Conflict is always nice. 😀

@jenali Huzzah!

@jenali @winter-rose @that_writer_girl_99 @graciegirl @daeus @kate-flournoy I’m going to see how well I can write, even though I can’t see anything because of the glare. 😛

@jenali @winter-rose @that_writer_girl_99 @graciegirl @daeus @kate-flournoy I’m going to see how well I can write, even though I can’t see anything because of the glare. LP

@That_Writer_Girl_99 yeah. What he said. XD

Here are some things. I guess some of them were there with the previous excerpts too, I just didn’t remember them all (or didn’t have time to be thorough enough, which is also possible. :P).

Halle… Moonglade. Yes. That was the perfect name. Sure, she’d attempted to write several books, leaving them unfinished… but this was different. Yes, she’d…[Read more]

@That_Writer_Girl_99 ooooohhhh… you know what? It looks like you’ve got really good potential here for a disillusionment story. I really, really love the idea of the world outside being even worse than the prison.
What do you know about theme/message and building your story around it?
Because if you do have the world outside be worse than the…[Read more]