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Josiah DeGraaf changed their profile picture 9 years, 4 months ago
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
@ethryndal It actually grows on me the more I see it. Looking like a Russian novelist has always been a partial-dream of mine. 😀
@anne-of-lothlorien This will probably just be temporary, but I’ll at least do it for a week. 😉
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
@ethryndal It actually grows on me the more I see it. Looking like a Russian novelist has always been a partial-dream of mine. 😉
@anne-of-lothlorien This will probably just be temporary, but I’ll at least do it for a week. 😉
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
@ethryndal It actually grows on me the more I see it. Looking like a Russian novelist has always been a partial-dream of mine. 😉
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Hope Ann replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
@ethryndal *chokes* That… that is hysterical. I can’t believe how much the face looks like him while also looking so… off. XD And that frog. I get the impression that ‘The Wiser’ is somewhat indulgent while his frog keeps everyone in line when he isn’t looking.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Sam I am: Doom, Glitter, and Iphones in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
@Winter-Rose poor guy… *hugs him* Seriously though, you did great. First person pov is not one of my strong points and can be very easy to do typically, but you did great with it. Thanks for sharing. 😀
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Sam I am: Doom, Glitter, and Iphones in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
@Winter-Rose My heart aches for poor Sam. *groan* Poor, poor guy. XD
That was great. His POV!
I did catch several thingies, mostly punctuation errors, while I was reading through; if you want me to tell you them.
I wonder, did the powdered sugar incident have inspiration from real life? It seems like it would. 😛 -
Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Sam I am: Doom, Glitter, and Iphones in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
@Winter_Rose My heart aches for poor Sam. *groan* Poor, poor guy. XD
That was great. His POV!
I did catch several thingies, mostly punctuation errors, while I was reading through; if you want me to tell you them.
I wonder, did the powdered sugar incident have inspiration from real life? It seems like it would. 😛 -
Emma Flournoy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
@Ethryndal XD XD XD That is amazing. @Aratrea you could put that as a picture with your credentials—Josiah the Wiser, on your video series or books of advice to growing writers. 😀
Btw @Anne-of-Lothlorien, @SleepwalkingMK is an ENFP. Also, if you’re not very extroverted, how do you know you aren’t an INFP? *wiggles eyebrows* Maybe you are. :D…[Read more]
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@Daeus yep. 590 words, so I’m pretty happy. 🙂 Thanks yourself.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@Daeus writing now. I’ll be going until two o clock.
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Snapper replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
@aratrea Mayhaps I should say I’m sorry…
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Writer's corner #5 in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@Daeus about to be. I’ll tag you when I start.
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
*screams*
@Ethryndal aaauuuuggghhhh!!! I’m dying! *chokes on her laughter and topples over off her chair and goes into spasms on the floor*PERFECT. Absolutely perfect.
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
@ethryndal Wow; I’m getting major “Russian author” vibes from that sketch, so it’s really hard for me to complain about having that look! 😛 Probably the closest to Dostoevsky I’ll ever get. 😉
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Snapper replied to the topic Character Art Exchange in the forum Art 9 years, 4 months ago
@graciegirl *maniacal laugh* Mwahahaha!
No…actually, I think that would just be horrible to myself, because I know what’s going to happen. I haven’t even gotten your village yet. Not yet…but soon. After I get past these butterflies. *grrr*
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Novel Excerpt (Feedback Welcome) in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 years, 4 months ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 could you give me the link to the doc again? Mine is doing weird things.
That sounds like a great solution. Good job. I notice you’re thinking in wider perspectives now— purposefully using the interactions to develop or manipulate. *wiggles eyebrows* Excellent work, my young padawan. 😉
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
@anne-of-lothlorien Probably the same place I got my “scraggly coarse tarantula beard.” 😛
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
@anne-of-lothlorien Probably the same place I got my “scraggly coarse tarantula beard.” =P
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Josiah DeGraaf replied to the topic The Legend of King Daeus in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 years, 4 months ago
Not sure what I’m supposed to think about this… 😛
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