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Snapper posted an update 8 years, 10 months ago
Hey guys! *waves* I’m going to take another hiatus. I’ll be back within a week or so…
Don’t do anything exciting without me.
@emily @daeus @kate-flournoy @catwing @epicaddie2 @graciegirl @ethryndal @ingridrd @salome01w4g @anyoneelse 😀 -
Jessi Rae replied to the topic Finding Secrets~ To Uncover A Synopsis in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
@catwing I don’t know much about writing synopses, but what you have sounds super interesting! I can’t wait to read the story and find out how Alex and her friends save the kingdom. 🙂
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Ingrid replied to the topic Critique this? in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 10 months ago
@dekreel This is a great poem. I love the tree’s voice.
There are definitely some parts that are awkward. I echo what @daughteroftheking said about the lineHow I long for a pool of water to the rim
And I also agree with @jane-maree about the dark mood. I felt like the tree was dying and in agony almost the whole time. Maybe turn his…[Read more]
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Ingrid replied to the topic Inspiration Board in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
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Ingrid replied to the topic Please critique this story! in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 10 months ago
@emerald-flyer Awww…thanks for the feedback!
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Ingrid replied to the topic Please critique this story! in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 10 months ago
@emily Thanks for your comment! I know, it honestly makes me feel guilty too…
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Ingrid replied to the topic Inspiration Board in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
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Ingrid replied to the topic Inspiration Board in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
I saw this one at a hotel once and had to laugh…
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Ingrid replied to the topic Inspiration Board in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
@kballen Oh, that’s a good one!
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Ingrid replied to the topic Inspiration Board in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
@dragon-snapper *raises right hand solemnly* I shall never offend a dragon again.
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Ingrid replied to the topic Please critique this story! in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 10 months ago
@dragon-snapper Yeeeah, I was worried about that. Thanks for the feedback!
@kate-flournoy Awwwwww…thanks!
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Snapper replied to the topic Inspiration Board in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
@ingridrd I’m back…but if anyone comes along claiming I must return to the gold from whence I came, I don’t know what I’ll do. Especially is someone says:
that.
@salome01w4g *lights your sword* Go forth and conquer! -
Snapper replied to the topic Please critique this story! in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 10 months ago
@ingridrd I can’t hug all of them!! I had like 120 stuffed animals…now I have guilt.
*sigh*
My only critique is that I though the dog was real so I was confused when you said the button nose was falling off…but otherwise it is really cute. 😀
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Kate Flournoy replied to the topic Please critique this story! in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 10 months ago
@Ingridrd ooh, I’m getting strong velveteen rabbit/toy story vibes. 😀 I love the open end though; there’s still hope. 😉
And… believe it or not I really don’t have any criticism. It’s adorable. It made me feel guilty about my stuffed leopard that I haven’t talked to in ages. And it has that sweet, half-wistful tone of all stories told from the…[Read more] -
Ingrid replied to the topic Please critique this story! in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 10 months ago
Maybe I should tag some people…what an idea?!? *slaps face*
@emily @dragon-snapper @kate-flournoy @daeus @that_writer_girl_99 @anyone -
Ingrid started the topic Please critique this story! in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 years, 10 months ago
FEEDBACK WANTED
Hey, guys!
I wrote this very short story a while back and just looked at it again. Could you give me some constructive criticism? Pretty please?? Thanks!The day I arrive, Mother stuffs me in the dark closet to wait. She places me inside a cardboard box, filled with the other toys. There is a necklace, a set of paints, two…[Read more]
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Ingrid replied to the topic Inspiration Board in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
@dragon-snapper Come back! I didn’t mean it!
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Ingrid replied to the topic Inspiration Board in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 10 months ago
@daeus I know, right?
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We’ll try to keep the excitement to a minimum…see you soon!
*plans all the exciting stuff to happen while @dragon-snapper ‘s away*
Hehee, *suddenly gets inspiration to finish next 50 chapters of each of my WIP* Enjoy *innocent grin*…… 😉 😛 😀
@emily @salome01w4g @ethryndal You guys are making it really hard to take a hiatus… 😛
It’s our evil masterplan, Snapper. We don’t like being without you.