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RAE replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 3 months ago
It might be a bit longer before I post the next story. I have one story, possibly two that are already partly written before I post the next story. Sorry for the wait.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
Aww, poor Riker. 🥺
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hybridlore replied to the topic Scenes in the forum Plotting 1 year, 3 months ago
I would consider getting out a blank doc or piece of paper and writing what you know about the story on it. Sometimes it’s definitely hard to know where to go after scenes, and knowing the main goal of your story and what’s going to happen will help. I used to just write whatever I felt like, but for TCOH I’ve actually figured out a…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
Awesome, thanks!!
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RAE replied to the topic Scenes in the forum Plotting 1 year, 3 months ago
I wouldn’t call myself a source as far as plots and scenes but do have one thing to say
Additionally, I feel like I’m forcing my characters to do something without actually letting them decide
This sounds like you don’t know your characters well enough. Maybe work a little more on character development and getting comfy in your character cloak. W…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic First Draft Blues in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
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So… the first draft of Guardian Angels I literally started writing while waiting for a piano lesson, and I had no idea what I was doing. I still have no idea honestly. Apparently, my idea of ‘first draft’ is wing it.
And I currently only get motivation from my characters and someone very special so I have a lot of unfinished…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
@ellette-giselle @koshka @whalekeeper @theshadow
And y’all, you’re able to like, give me critiques for these. I just meant I didn’t need super precise, line-by-line edits since I’m going to rewrite this stuff eventually. So if you have input, please share it.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
Thank you!!
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
Thanks!! So glad you like it! 😁 And hey, if you have tips, I know you’re the synesthesia expert so I would love your input (or advice) if you have any.
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Esther replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 3 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @the_lost-journal
Plus, the Bible requires two things if you want to read it. Context, and an open mind. You need history and context to even understand HALF, if not ALL of the Bible.
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Context and History is all in the Bible. Reading other passages helps you understand other passages.
I would like to add something about t…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 year, 3 months ago
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Smiley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
Okay but to be fair Riker might be one of the few who does understands🥺🥺
LEO!!!!!!! 😭😭
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Smiley replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 3 months ago
@freed_and_redeemed
I REMEMBER NOW!!! CAUSE I REMEMBER THAT ANGELINA MADE ME SADand I was so excited that she got to be with Jakob
JAKOB IS MINE (nothing against Joshua I’m sure he’s great lol)
oooh👀
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Smiley replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 3 months ago
I have honestly forgotten names of the bois but I believe the second oldest (I want to say his name is Jakob??) IS MINE!!!!!
honestly I love brother relationships so much and I’m so excited!!! Please tag me on any scenes!!(and the board looks incredible)
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 3 months ago
You should also go off teachings from the saints.
The Bible is the WORD OF GOD!!!!! How could anything people say be superior to that?
I understand that God gives people special revelations too, but they won’t contradict the Bible. As Christians we need to respect the Bible as the ultimate authority.
Plus, the Bible requires two…
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Smiley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
im so jealous!!!! I want to go soooooooooooo bad
I’m huge pro life and I want to do work for different pro life organizations when I’m older
I listen to relatable by Allie Beth Stuckey (huge fan of hers) and I know that she did some speaking in Washington DC for the life march and I really wish I could’ve heard her also…[Read more]
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RAE replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 3 months ago
Here is my expertly made pronunciation guide:
That is the BEST pronunciation guide I’ve ever seen! lol
oh, i like it!
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RAE replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 3 months ago
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RAE replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 3 months ago
Question Baron just asked in the story I’m writing: “Are an onion a bird or a mammal?” (please excuse his grammar). Things are about to get interesting…
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RAE replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 3 months ago
Glad you liked it!
She won’t be in the next story, just warning you, but Max, Ruby, and Rya will be returning. Story after that, Jenna will be returning with Ken.
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