Brianne

@ellette-giselle

Wait really??!!!! I want to read that!!! I love capture scenes. Especial if the badguys are really mean and the hero still doesn’t lose his head. all though, from what I’ve seen of Nahim………

He does pretty well in the beginning, but then Vorgan uses Nahim’s greatest fear to break him. It’s the darkest hour in my book, and I haven’t…[Read more]

@highscribeofaetherium

@anyone else who’s read Nahim is bad at guns
I take it back!
So, I was doing some research stuff this afternoon, ya know, adding more suspicious stuff to my search history, and finally looked up how to correctly write a sword fight, cuz I’ve been avoiding those since I’m really bad at fight scenes. During my quest for…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle @savannah_grace2009

Writing sprints are really fun! So are crawls… which is something similar, but it’s longer and more involved. I’ve been doing some of those over at the King’s Daughters’ Writing Camp. (Which y’all should check out! It’s awesome!!)

@savannah_grace2009

Lukas 

“Woah,” he breathed, watching Liv’s complete control over the water. “Cool.” He half-smiled.

I’m kinda stuck now, lol. We can keep their conversation going or end it here if you want. Or maybe we can have them meet up with some other peeps.

@highscribeofaetherium

One, Mandin said it would take Nahim several minutes to defeat an opponent with a sword. Exchanges with swords actually usually last for a handful of seconds.

I know that, you know that, Nahim knows that, but Mandin? Sure, he probably does, but he’s trying to make a point. He’s been attempting to get Nahim into guns for a…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Just wanted to pop in and say I love how this is going! Cassian is a much better character imo now that I’ve seen him with Sef.

I know it’s super hard not to doubt yourself and your writing…. I think it’s just a writer thing. And it’s hard when it seems so easy for other people. But it doesn’t have to be perfect right now.…[Read more]

@esther-c

Livia

“I’m an Aquino,” she shrugged. “I was born with it.”

She formed a miniature waterspout over her hands and watched it whirl, then letting it fall into a small puddle at her feet.

@savannah_grace2009

Lukas 

“I miss my pani…” Liv said. Her hands slowly filled with water. Lukas blinked a few times, opening and closing his mouth.

“Wai— wha? How did you do that?” He pointed to her hands, his eyes wide.

@savannah_grace2009

Aww, I loved this scene!! 🥰

Don’t think I’ve posted this before, but have been wanting to.It’s the beginning scenes for Black Wolf, Green Eyes, Chase’s second novel idea. If you don’t know, Chase is a young man by now.

@freed_and_redeemed @savannah_grace2009 I have a Chase scene you may or may not have seen before

“You boys have five minutes to finish before we head out ag…

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@ellette-giselle

i like the story idea, but the tech level sounds to much like our time. I don’t get that sci-fi vibe from it.

Any books, movies, CDs, pictures, letters, or anything that in the least way suggested something that we don’t agree with will be

CD’s should not be mentioned. By 2065, those will be as unheard of in a household as c…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Sorry I’ve been MIA… I just started a YWAM school this week so I’ve been really busy and haven’t had time to read anything on here. I’ll try to get to it sometime if I have a chance! If you need me just tag me so I see it and hopefully can get back to you sooner!

I’ll post more scenes if I find any good ones.

@freed_and_redeemed @savannah_grace2009 @jonas @grcr @ellette-giselle @linus-smallprint @loopylin @whalekeeper @theshadow @highscribeofaetherium @idk

Hi. This is a scene from Guardians Angels. Criticism is requested and welcome.

Nahims sword sang as it sailed towards his opponent. The opponent blocked, swinging its second sword towards Nahim…

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@ellette-giselle

Oh no! I’m so sorry again…

I need to spend some time with my sister, we’re about to do a Bible study!

I feel sooo bad, but I have to go….I’m sorry!

It’s writing nonstop until whatever time you set. Like I usually go for fifteen to thirty minutes, and write about 1-2K words if I get enough inspiration.

If you want, you can…[Read more]

@grcr

Aww thanks girl <3

@ellette-giselle

Don’t be sad!!!! I only thought of it because the whole scene felt winter and cold and dead to me. Like those feelings just mirrored Sef’s. It was you writing her so well that made me think of it. Actually, the other day i was thinking, “Man, she is so good! Look at hers compared to mine!” lol.

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@ellette-giselle

Oh no I’m so sorry…I didn’t see this!!!

Could we maybe still do it now??

I understand if you can’t XD