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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
Hi!
I know my profile says “Savannah Grace” but that’s just my pen name 🙂 you can call me Sara
I have been working on a story I hope to get published in a few years. I have it posted on a forum on KP, do you want me to tag you?
I write fantasy/sci fi/allegory books. Here’s a little blurb:
Andromeda-a world who’s beauty is t…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
Hey guys It’s five in the morning where I live and I’m sick so I just woke up and can’t fall back asleep so I’m bored 🙁
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Smiley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
we were talking about how we hope Marvel will get their act together and start making good movies for Sam and Bucky, and talking about how Marvel should pull in their fans to help them brainstorm…cause we’ve got loads of ideas 😂
I know right?! I mean why haven’t they asked us to write them scripts, I’d be happy to do it…[Read more]
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Smiley replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 1 month ago
Riker!!!!
That’s so sad… but it’s a good arc… so yes
and every writer knows you choose a good arc over your characters’ happiness XD
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 1 month ago
Let me know if you want more chapters 🙂
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 1 month ago
Chapter 5: The UNIT
Triggers: Violence
Neveah awoke to the horrible sound of beeping monitors and unfamiliar voices.
Her eyes flashed open, but now she wished that she could erase what she had just seen from her memory.
She was in a bed, covered in white sheets. The place reeked of Pythonos. Worse, there was one hovering over her right now.…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 1 month ago
4th Chapter: Stolen
It all started with a scream.
No, it was more like a wail.
It was the anguished cry of a mother being torn from her child.
Sef was on her way to the slums, carrying water back from the well when the cry made her drop the buckets. The precious water sloshed all over the dry ground which absorbed it within seconds. Sef did…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 1 month ago
Third Chapter: A Hard Life
Trigger warning: a slap, threats, etc.
“Git your grubby fingers off that bread!” Lilitu froze. He looked longingly at the loaf of bread which might as well have been a bar of gold, before turning to face the enraged Azer. He turned to face the man, leaning on his cane for support, subconsciously tucking his twist…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 1 month ago
Second Chapter:
Azuri screamed in agony as she pressed a hand against her round stomach.
“Nathan,” she rasped, reaching for her husband’s hand. “The baby!” Her face twisted in agony and she fell back against the pillows which were now damp with her sweat, exhausted.
Nathan squeezed Azuri’s sweaty hand, willing himself to stay calm. He tried no…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Finding You Critique (Will be continued Updates!) in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 1 month ago
Oh my goodness I love your story! I have to find out what happens next! PLEASSSE post the next ones!!!!! You have to publish this!!!!!! It’s amazing!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Playlists for writing/rant about your favorite songs in the forum Music 3 years, 1 month ago
I listen to christian music while I write.
My favorite song right now is Sweet Ever After by Ellie Holcomb! But I listen to basically every christian song you can name.
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Allison posted an update 3 years, 1 month ago
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 1 month ago
thanks @jonas and @highscribeofaetherium ! It’s always so encouraging when you get positive feedback. Thank you so much for reading it! This next chapter seems to be a different story, but the prologue just explains the story behind how evil took over Andromeda. So don’t let the change of scene and new characters confuse you!
Here’s the next…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ started the topic My Work In Progress in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 1 month ago
Hi everyone! I am writing a novel and would like some help with it. Here is the first chapter/prologue. It is supposed to be an allegory, so if you get Garden of Eden vibes, that’s why!
@jonas @esther-c @kydonandwillow
If you guys like it and want to see the next chapter, let me know!
Prologue: Elysium
Many years ago, peace reigned on…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Plotting Help (Free of Charge!) in the forum Plotting 3 years, 1 month ago
that would be great!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Plotting Help (Free of Charge!) in the forum Plotting 3 years, 1 month ago
thanks for your help! 🙂
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Plotting Help (Free of Charge!) in the forum Plotting 3 years, 1 month ago
I know that outlining helps make stories better and easier to write, but I just don’t know how to get started. I’ve tried using Milanote and Reedsy (platforms that can help with writing) and other stuff. I’ve even looked for articles on KP and on google, but nothing seems to help!
I wish I could write a story with an outline. Want to swap? lol!
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