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Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 10 hours, 25 minutes ago
first off, I want a copy of your pfp!!!
Okay
Also, do you like coffee? Because I have a funny black cat one for coffee (pinterest is my friend)
Second, I find bad eating habits common among Authors. I think it’s because we get so lost in our book worlds that we forget about the real world.
Yeah…I can relate to t…[Read more]
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Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 10 hours, 30 minutes ago
@raxforge (because this short story has changed a little since you last read it) @ellette-giselle @keilah-h @highscribeofaetherium
Fifth story!
(not sure if I like the title, but it’ll do)
A Scar Hidden by a Scarf
Cold. Freezing cold.Baron’s teeth chattered as he hugged himself, pulling his thin leather jacket closer around his body. His b…[Read more]
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Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 10 hours, 34 minutes ago
lol. No. I don’t do that until closer to 2:00 in the afternoon………………….
pretty much same for me usually, except the past few days. Mom and Dad have recently kept a stock of my favorite cereal so I now have incentive to eat breakfast, so recently I’ve skipped lunch.
And I just realized as I said that that I haven’t eaten anything…[Read more]
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Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 day, 1 hour ago
(I’m only gone foe a few days, and suddenly people are changing their usernames and profile pictures all at once. How am I supposed to know who’s who anymore?)
You look at tags. Those never change.
I think I’m partly to blame for this. I changed my name to a silly nickname of mine, then Andrew changed his, and then other peo…[Read more]
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Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 day, 2 hours ago
Your senses were correct! This is a redemption story.
Small note on the next story, it was originally began for the short story prompt “a story of a scar” but never finished as such for it sparked the entire Baron Chronicles actually being written, and the story behind Baron’s scar has already been revealed so I had to…[Read more]
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Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic Magic Systems in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 2 hours ago
Wow, name-changing is becoming a tread.
Tsk, tsk. No self-deprecation allowed on this topic.
Now you sound like Andrew lol
Does Chase have the element of Creatures? After all, he is the ultimate ✨Disney Princess✨!
I have that meme saved somewhere…
Yes, he’s actually the reason that element came to be. He’s also the reason I…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 4 hours ago
Apparently my feet changed that, which meant my story was changing itself. A terrifying thought indeed.
Dun … dun… DUN!!! XD
Nice segment. Interested to see where it goes next…
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Magic Systems in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 5 hours ago
Okay everyone, I’m gonna share some of the races in my world!
Aquinos:
Aquinos have blue skin, hair, and eyes. They have the power to pull moisture out of the air and manipulate it. If there is no moisture in the air, they are helpless. They also tend to be easily dehydrated if they’ve used their power too much, but most of the time they c…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Magic Systems in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 5 hours ago
YOU CHANGED YOUR NAME TOOOO
YOU’RE NOT A POTATO ANYMORE
*brain explodes*
I LOVE IT
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Magic Systems in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 5 hours ago
AHHH YOU HOPPED ON THE TREND TOOOOO
I LOVE IT
You can still share those, since I would classify fantastical powers/abilities as magic on this topic. Basically we’re here to talk about any fantastical abilities, technically magic in-story or not. XD
Okay perfect!
I’m still fleshing those out a little as to why and how their powers w…[Read more]
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 day, 7 hours ago
I don’t remember hearing about your church on the news (I’ve watched news streams that have included some news from Canada) but I remember hearing about Artur Pawlowski and his church. And then in ’22 of course I heard about the Freedom Convoy and that was super exciting to see so many people taking a stand for…[Read more]
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Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic Magic Systems in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 10 hours ago
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Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 10 hours ago
BTW how’s that drawing of Soldier going?
I wasn’t able to print the reference pictures until this morning. Currently, I’m thinking over posing.
My brother took the pictures and asked what it was. He had a good laugh over Soldier’s grin as he teleports bread lol. I’m gonna try to get him to read your fanfic, I think he’d like it a lot.
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Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 day, 10 hours ago
@ellette-giselle Here you go.
@keilah-h @highcribeofaethum
Fourth story!
Brutus
I am a hideous monster. I have taken so many lives, caused so much pain. And why? Why did I do it all? To please Father. To feel like I belonged and had purpose. That I was worth something. My true parents abandoned me, Father took me in. I had to prove to him…[Read more] -
Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 day, 11 hours ago
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hybridlore replied to the topic Character Arcs in the forum Characters 1 day, 11 hours ago
Oh yeah, this is also a great article: https://booklaurie.com/blog/the-psychology-of-creating-characters/
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Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 12 hours ago
I’ll be praying for you!
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 day, 12 hours ago
I think it’s because we are a strong nation, and the only way we’ll go down is if we destroy ourselves, so those who hate America want to see us divided and destroyed from the inside.
Agreed
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Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 13 hours ago
Baron (Brutus)—with Ben Gunn, Flare, Ellis, and Jenna following after Felicity.Â
Brutus watched the creatures coming his way, dropping down his scarf. He didn’t know if the small band could out run the things. Could he muster enough wind to carry them away? He could try. A powerful wind came to him, and he turned…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Character Arcs in the forum Characters 1 day, 13 hours ago
I love that story idea! It sounds super interesting, and I would totally pick it up. Elishavet had some great advice. Let’s see… what do I do for character arcs?
Honestly, it takes a while for these things to come together in my writing. I don’t sit down to write for the first time and already know all the details of my plot and c…[Read more]
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