Brianne

@koshka

Sorry, I forgot to add you. Chapter 3 and 4 are out!

@ellette-giselle

Also, what’s on Joseph’s hand in the one of him with Amelia in prison?

@ellette-giselle

FOR LTBL

Hmm… I don’t think there was any scenes I wanted to see that you didn’t get. Do you have illustrations for anywhere near the end? You probably wouldn’t want to show Aaron’s execution, but maybe him standing arrested by the soldiers or something.

My favorites–probably the one of Sabina hugging Turin, the two little…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Yeah, unfortunately it’s really messy. Usually stems from insecurities, I think.

@ellette-giselle @theshadow

Chapters 3 and 4 are out! I think I’m going to post these on a separate doc for now, and we’ll see how it goes. As of now, I’m also planning to post two chapters every week, maybe on Tuesdays. That way I’m not glued to my screen all the time waiting to hear y’all’s feedback, and it gives me some time to catch up on my…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Yayyyy!!! Illustrations!!

(Even tho I already saw most of these haha. Great job!!)

Also, you can delete a forum??? 

@ellette-giselle

It was rough, and it was subtly done…….. yeah. I won’t go into it, but I went through a lot of abuse from them, but so subtly that it looked like I was the problem (I even believed I was) It wasn’t until things started to come to light and people started finding out what was really going on that i was able to see the truth.<…

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@the_lost-journal

Wow, that is a lot! Do you go to a mega church? I assume that because you talk about lasers and fog and such.

I don’t consider it a megachurch. That might depend on your definition, but most megachurches have more than 2000 members, and we’re not that big. We do have lights and such, but there are other smaller churches who use…[Read more]

How big is your church? (if you go to church.)

The church I attend is rather small (less than 50 people) but we’ve been slowly growing the past couple years so maybe eventually the pews won’t be so empty.

What is one thing you disagree/don’t understand with a different denomination?

Oh dear, there is an entire list of things I disagree w…[Read more]

@the_lost-journal

How big is your church? (if you go to church.)

Roughly 1700-1800

What is one thing you disagree/don’t understand with a different denomination?

Ummm… probably the biggest thing is what some of us were discussing above, regarding whether or not spiritual gifts are still active in the church today (I believe they are).

What is y…

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@ellette-giselle

*sings* Meeeeeeeeeeeeee!

@ellette-giselle

Here’s an alternate version I just edited. I didn’t remove all hints, but I tried to make it less explicit–still not sure which version I’ll eventually go with, though.

When a classmate invites her to an underground church meeting, Sara starts to wonder if she’s been missing something all along–or Someone. But her twin bro…[Read more]

@keilah-h

That does make it easier! I’m pretty sure I have them all… though it’s been a while since I actually saw them. I don’t even know if I’ve come across the warden or armadillos, but I haven’t played in a while. Maybe I’ll check it out!

@keilah-h

Wow, that sounds like a cool seed! I don’t know if it would work for Xbox though… the editions kind of confuse me. 😅

@stephie

That’s hilarious 😂

@ellette-giselle

Gotcha. That definitely makes sense. I’ll see what I can do!

@ellette-giselle

Aw, thanks!! 😊 Yeah, I think maybe all of them came from you. Thanks for that, by the way! 😁

@ellette-giselle

Wow. *round of applause* You wrote all these? That’s insane.

I’m getting what you mean now, and I have a couple ideas. Your suggestions were super, super helpful. I’ll try to look at them later on my computer and adjust the main blurb.

One thing, though— I noticed that in most of your examples (the last one hints at it) you poi…[Read more]

I really want to get it, but do you think my parents will worry about me if I do?

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