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Ruth replied to the topic The Quote Archive in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
“I think the dog is wind powered.” – me
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
For all you ladies on here, there’s an online camp that runs every few months, set up sort of like our little kingdom here to help encourage writers and help them reach a goal. Before camp you’ll set a goal for yourself (writing ## chapters/scenes/blog posts/words/etc.) and try to reach it in that month. You’re a part of a tent of about 10 or so…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Hall of Characters in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
Yayayayayayyyy!
I’ll definitely be posting on here this weekend!!
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
Oooh, I like it!! I could definitely feel and experience what Jonathan was feeling and going through.
The only suggestion I would have would be to eliminate some of the passive voice (“The floor was sinking…” “…his brother was on his hands and knees…”). It will tighten up the prose and draw the reader in more.
But that’…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
Thanks for reaching out, Kefa!! I’d love to chat some more!! 🤗
Hmm… my WIP…
Well, I have a few, but a couple of those have been put on the back burner for now. They were mostly ones written while I was trying to figure out my genre. Which, I’ve decided, is probably gonna be contemporary young adult fiction and histori…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
Yeah, I mean, it’s really no big deal to me because they’re spelled slightly different (Halle and Hallie), and how they look and act is completely different so they’re very different people in my head. 🤷🏻♀️
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
Pov you just notice that you created a new character with a name that nobody you know irl has but literally meet someone with that name a few months later
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
Alpha
Alpha still looked confused but nodded to Rax. He then stopped leaning on the wall, walking towards Ms. Barnes. “I can’t help you find them, but I’m more than willing to fight them again. And before you say anything, I am not a student of this school so you have no responsibility for me nor authority over me.…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
@whalekeeper @raxforge @ellette-giselle @koshka
Alpha
Alpha crossed his arms.
“I have a feeling we’ll be seeing each other again soon, Ms. Barnes. Peace and I are like positive and negative. One more note, make sure Silvia is mentally stable before you go interrogating her. She was pretty shaken up.”
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Ruth replied to the topic Gauging Interest in a Special New RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
Sorry, you’re gonna have to put up with our numerous off-topic conversations!
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Ruth replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
I miss this rp SOOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH!!!!!!!!
The spot where it gets super chaotic is page 247-285 ish I think????
Plz ignore anything Latin things going on. It was purposefully not the way Latin is really, but it still is pretty bad.
Also, ignore these ending pages (the 350’s and such). we kinda turned this rp back to what it was…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
Almost tagged myself XD the stupid things I do.
Alpha
“I am Alpha Grath. I was returning from giving something to my sister when I heard a man saying something to a student. Something along the lines of coming with him somewhere I think, I didn’t pay much attention to what he said, only the way he said it. He was acting…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
Lol
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Ruth replied to the topic Gauging Interest in a Special New RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
I’m in!
@raxforge @kefa @the_lost-journal
For all the new ppl looking into Character Party, you should find the part where the castle was burning down, the queen was almost killed, the villains were running rampant, the charries were squabbling and Prince Fennin was trying to hold everything together…cuz I think that was our most…[Read more]
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Ruth started the topic I'd like some thoughts on this scene in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 11 months ago
So…this is a scene that I wrote at like 11:00 last night. It hasn’t been edited so sorry if it’s a total mess.
I’m not looking for any particular things like grammar and such, I’d just kinda like whatever feedback you can give me. Maybe how the scene effected you? Idk. Anyways, this is from Chapter 19…
Ash. Thick and heavy in the air, coating…
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
Alpha
“What I meant by ‘at bay’ is keeping it under control, as on keeping it from exploding out in a sudden uncontrollable burst. I’ll explain more later. For now, I believe that masked woman is here to ask us some questions.”
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
Alpha
Alpha raised a black eyebrow, studying Rax up and down as if he had never seen him before. He held out his hand and grasped Rax’s wrist.
“We do do something similar to a handshake. I was simply being rude. I apologize.” Alpha bowed his head. “My name is Alpha Grath. So you’re a fire elemental who also can heal, that means you…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 11 months ago
@ellette-giselle The marriage theme story sounds really interesting! If you post any more of it, I’d love to read it!
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