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Esther replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
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Esther replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Yeeah
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Esther replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Don’t even ask about the time. Idk why it looks like that XDD
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Esther replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Most users ever online was 13 on December 22, 2023 9:52 pm
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Allison replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
We did it!!!!!
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Allison replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Were there! I guess we need 13….
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Esther replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Almost there guyssss
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
I’m here….I’ve been excited all day XD
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Ummm…OF COURSE!!! I THOUGHT YOU’D NEVER ASK!!! lol
Should I have her randomly appear in the dance class and be paired with Chase since he’s not dancing with anyone?
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
I know Abbie Emmons on YouTube loves the three act story structure, so if you want to explore that a little more, I suggest checking out her videos. Especially the one just about the inciting incident. I think she does a pretty good job of explaining it. 😉
I will check it out!!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Girlllll I love your writing so much!! (it almost always makes me tear up but I love it!!!!!)
Does it seem boring?
NOOOO! Definitely not! I was so into it, and I could see everything in my mind!How is the pace?
Can you already begin to see the MC’s struggles/arcs?
A little, I can tell that Riker struggles with guilt and L…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
I mean…it depends on what you mean by the inciting incident….I’m new to plotting XD In a way, Neveah being pregnant is the inciting incident, because it triggers a chain reaction that basically turns Sef’s world upside-down. If that makes sense. I’m not sure about if it is the inciting incident or not….but it is definitely so…
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Tysm for your help and encouragement!! Every single time someone tells me something they loved about my story it makes me smile 🙂
At the end. I don’t think pregnancy is enough to make somebody have that many issues unless she was also sick, and the buildup made me think her sickness was going to tie into the greater story i…
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Allison replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Ack, Mom just said dinner when were ready so I might not be on at 5
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Allison replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Yeah, we eat really early.😅
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Allison replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Were already so close!
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Esther replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Dis is gonna be a breeze 😎
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Esther replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
You’re not the only one! We eat at 5 too, lol.
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Allison replied to the topic Break the Record!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 9 months ago
Im also EST and 5 is usually around our dinner time. Hopefully I can make it…
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Allison posted an update 2 years, 9 months ago
“Hey Dad, will you buy me a flame thrower?
Of course not. Don’t be silly.
Even if I didn’t use it in the house?”
― Watterson Bill, Calvin and Hobbes - Load More
Hey!! How does it feel to be done with your NOVEL????
Great! A little bit weird though, I have been doing it for nearly a year. Now I’m just rewriting scenes I dont like, filling in the blanks which is really fun! Hows your writing?
My writing’s going pretty good, I’ve been doing some major work on the first couple chapters, just making the prose better and making descriptions more vivid…I just really love that first chapter (the one I shared on the Chat Chat) for some reason…XD
I do to! Its so realistic and sweet.
If you want to, I really dont know what to think of this scene I wrote. I feel like I can do more with it, any points would be appreciated 😀
(I warn you, Its a little tense)
All the air seemed to drain out of my lungs. My limbs went limp with fear and I could barely register the clouds and dark sky that were around me.
This was it, this was…[Read more]
Oops forgot your tag @savannah_grace2009