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Esther replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 years ago
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Esther replied to the topic HELP WANTED! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years ago
I would if I could! But life is pretty busy right now and since sci-fi’s not my genre, I don’t really feel qualified to give good feedback. 😅
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 years ago
@Loopylin @whalekeeper @smiley @highscribeofaetherium (Sorry I can’t remember who here is a marvel nerd!) @anyone else
Are pics back up?!
Well, we’ll see if it works.
I did this drawing of Steve and Toney awhile ago and I’ve been waiting to post it.

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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
I gasped out loud when you said that 😮 Oh no… I’m so sorry I came off that way! I replied quickly because I had to leave for class, and didn’t think through what I sounded like.
It’s ok! I’m glad we got it cleared up lol.
Wingfeather is nostalgic for me in some ways, but I will never say it is a masterpiece of writing. It kind of si…
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 2 years ago
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 2 years ago
I know I said I was going to leave, but I’m just bored lol!
also, one little issue I have: maybe wait till Sabina’s at least 18? I’m 17 and I wouldn’t marry a guy now even if I knew him very well. My mom got married at 17 but I was under the impression she was the exception.
I agree with Keilah.
I know your story is set in medieval times, so th…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic HELP WANTED! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years ago
I really like it! Mandin and Nahim’s relationship is probably my favorite part. I enjoyed reading it a lot. Please tag me when you have more chapters finished ☺️
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hybridlore replied to the topic Write to bring me pain. in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
LOL this is such a funny idea! Now I’m kind of motivated to go write, xD
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Esther replied to the topic Write to bring me pain. in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
So are you strengthening your core to increase your balance in jiu-jitsu or for other reasons? Cuz I’m a volleyball player and have some really good reps for balance… 😏 (only a few core exercises tho)
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic Write to bring me pain. in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
Oh, i need to get some writing done so I will definitely be participating. Maybe I’ll write today and then wait a day or to for the soreness from today to go away before posting XD it looks like you’ve already had a workout here
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Esther replied to the topic Write to bring me pain. in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
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Esther replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 2 years ago
@loopylin @whalekeeper @mineralizedwritings
Yeah, I mean, I personally prefer that whoever I’m talking to would make eye contact as well, or at least try to. But as long as they’re not like, staring at the floor or clearly not even looking at me, then I’m not offended or anything.
I do believe consistently making eye contact takes practice and i…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
Thinking about my opinions on this topic just a few months ago…y’all, I’m so glad God is helping me grow XD
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
@rae @whalekeeper @mineralizedwritings I love how we can all peacefully discuss our different opinions on this💖
Y’all are the best : )
I agree with you, Min! Writing God in a story is difficult, and it makes it even harder depending on the genre you write. I don’t think all books have to have God be explicitly stated or mentioned or even…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic I've started my draft, would you guys keep reading this story? in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 years ago
XD painfully relatable is what I was going for! Yep, he needs his bestie.
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
@rae @whalekeeper @freed_and_redeemed @anyone else in the discussion
Mind if I add my two cents about God in stories?
Writing God into a story is really really hard, and it’s not something I would want to mess up. It can go well, or it can go badly. A lot of you here are familiar with the wingfeather saga, which was written by a Christian, but I…[Read more]
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
@whalekeeper @freed_and_redeemed
I love this😭😭 so well put and so true.
That’s part of the reason why I write such deeper, even darker stories too. I think it’s something that needs to be addressed more. Cheers to you, girlie💖
Awww thank you guys 😭😭💗
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
Of course! By the way, I didn’t mean to sound like I disagree with anything you said. When I said you touched nerves, I meant those thoughts felt very applicable to second-hand pain I have… kind have gone through? Through empathy? Your experience is ten times more direct than mine 😅 I’m thankful to hear your perspective.
*gasps with…[Read more]
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freedom posted an update 2 years ago
Editing has to be the most grueling part of the writing process 💀🫠
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years ago
Exactly! 🤪 Thx for responding to my little ramble 😚
You’re so welcome 💖🥰💖
Oof, characters can get annoying. I still have some from when I was a Teeny-Weeny Whaley, which is a pretty good record of remembering concepts, but nothing can stay on your mind consistently without stretching its stay at times.
I love them, but they can drive…[Read more]
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Leon set the plate and utensil aside on a counter.
How was he supposed to say what he had to say without sounding ungrateful? How was he supposed to explain the burning anger that still pulsed through his veins in a way they would understand?
Riker stood. “…This doesn’t have to change anything. I helped Leon this…[Read more]