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Esther replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
@highscribeofaetherium @jonas @rae @savannah_grace2009
Kian
Kian cocked as his head as he sauntered into what looked like a throne room. But it was no throne room like the one in the shah’s palace in Rashkitan. Everything here seemed more grand and glorious, unlike the shah’s simple grandeur of his throne room.
Two people fighting each oth…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
@esther @everyone
Okay, horse it is XD is there already a stable where she can keep him, or do we have to make it up on the spot?
Sure, she can share a dorm with Callista, I’ll just bring her to the school, then.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Well, it’s not necessarily a flashback. It’s a chapter that shows Sef’s life before the Pythonos capture Neveah and Hanna, and it is supposed to foreshadow a bit what’s going to happen in the future. Something seems kind of wrong with it though, and I’m not sure what XD
Yeah, I’ll definitely keep it somewhere, but for some reason I…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
(we have to get better at conversation XD but my mind’s been blank all week fro writing)
I know, me too. 😂
Ev
“Not much, what about you?”
“Same.” Ev chuckled and ran a hand through his hair. “We should probably go shopping for our outfits for the dance soon. I hear there’s a mall nearby.”
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
I think it’s fine. I don’t think there’s anything wrong with it except a few technical things which don’t really matter right now. I’m assuming this is a flashback, right?
You said it feels out of place in your book, so check to make sure that this flashback is establishing or foreshadowing something. Like, establish…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Heyyy welcome!
You can start her wherever you want. I have like six or seven charries in this RP (😐) so I have plenty to RP as if you want Livia to meet someone. But there’s also a lot of other people in here too who’d probably have characters to meet her. 🙂 She can share a dorm with my character Callista if you want. 👇 (Be…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Fynn
“Yeah. Name’s Chase, Chase Duke.”
“Nice to meet you, Chase,” Fynn said, giving him a firm handshake. “It’s technically my first year here too, but I’ve been late to class so many times that lots of people know who I am.” He pushed a hand through his hair and grinned sheepishly. “What brought you to the school?”
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Awww tysm!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Marcurious
“That is definitely not explaining where we are,” Marcurious sighed. “Hard way it is.”
He conjured up an image of a wildcat, and immediately morphed into one. He snarled, leaping and knocking his opponent to the ground, batting the knives away with rough paws. He roared in his enemy’s face, hissing. He unsheathed his claws and held t…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Marcurious
“Ooooh, a faceful of knives?” Marcurious butted into the conversation stepping between the two. “Jumping right to the threats are we?” he paused. “I happen to know a thing or two about threats. How about if you people explain where we are, I won’t shapeshift into a cat and claw your face off?”
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
@everyone
Can I have help with this scene? It seems really…idk, I just don’t like it for some reason. It could be that it’s out of place in my book, but I’m not sure.
Here it is:
Sef sat in a field of wildflowers, her eyes shining brighter than the sun overhead.
A smile graced her lips, and her hair fell in verdant waves down her back.
With…
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Characters of England | A 19th Century Role Play in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Reuben
“Deeply wounded indeed,” Reuben scoffed. “If that tablecloth meant the world to her, then maybe she shouldn’t have it.”
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Character Party! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Marcurious
He sat up, rubbing his head. The first thing he saw was two people trying to kill each other.
“Hey, guys,” he said, standing up. “Um…do you know where we are?” He asked. They ignored him. “You know, most people usually take being ignored as offensive.” Still no answer. “Well, if you’re going to fight, who’s side should I be on?”
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Do you want me to just bring her to the dorms? Or where should she show up at?
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
@everyone
Meet Livia Stone!
I haven’t developed her character much, but she’s from the world of Andromeda. She’s an Aquino, which means she can manipulate water, she has blue hair, eyes, and skin.
She loves animals, especially horses. (can she bring her horse Xandro? It’s totally fine if she can’t XD)
She is sarcastic at times, but she’s a…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Fynn
“Would-would you mind if…I kinda tagged along? I’m a little lost,” the boy asked.
Fynn exchanged a glance with Lukas and shrugged. “Sure, why not?” He pulled out his phone and checked the time, then chuckled sheepishly. “Hey Lukas, I actually have five more minutes. So we won’t be late at all.”
Lukas groaned and facepalmed. “So a…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic A Place to share/write whatever we’re working on: Worldbuilding, plot, etc in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
I just came across this and I love Luis!! He sounds awesome! 🥰
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
Ok that works! I’m not sure where to start for a RP, so if you want to start one, that’d be great. But if not, that’s totally fine too. 😂
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Esther replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 10 months ago
@anybody-who-knows-the-answer-to-my-question
How many days away is the dance, btw?
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