@sleepwalkingmk
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Joy replied to the topic My *gag* Children's Books in the forum Novel Critique Requests 8 years, 6 months ago
@catwing I could always use more advice 😀
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LivGiordano replied to the topic One of my MCs is a MK in the forum Characters 8 years, 6 months ago
@catwing Hmm. I could say a ton about this.
Like everyone else has said, yes, MKs are not all the same, stereotypes of either really good kids, or teens who don’t want to be there.
They can be just as normal as regular kids.
One thing I do notice, is that in general, it can be pretty hard to fit in. Living and knowing another culture very well,…[Read more]
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Grace H. replied to the topic Free verse Poem Advice/Critique in the forum Poetry 8 years, 6 months ago
I’m super super sorry for the confusion. This is only the beginning of the poem, not it in its entirety. I haven’t a title for it yet, but its about friendship and eventually about saying goodbye.
@dekreel I’m glad you like it!
@rochellaine Yes, I should probably read it out loud and see how it flows. And I almost put “relating across worlds”,…[Read more]
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Grace H. replied to the topic One of my MCs is a MK in the forum Characters 8 years, 6 months ago
@catwing A lot like what @rochellaine said, that MK’s might not struggle with bitterness, especially if they’ve been in this situation for basically their entire lives. I know I think my situation is normal (for me), and I wouldn’t change as this is what I’ve grown up with. As a result of living overseas, I’m not terribly picky about food or…[Read more]
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic A Year Ago… in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 My pleasure. XD
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic A Year Ago… in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@That_Writer_Girl_99 Yay!!! Congratulations, and may you reap the goodness of KP for many more years. 😉 D’ye remember our first conversation? It was regarding Luke Skywalker and whether or not he’s whiny. XD
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LivGiordano replied to the topic Free verse Poem Advice/Critique in the forum Poetry 8 years, 6 months ago
Ooh. I love this! @gh24682468999 I really love poetry. For free verse, it’s actually much easier to edit, because you don’t need to worry about the structure and keeping the rhyme.
To revise, I would make sure that the words are clear and concise. Choose your wording very carefully, especially with something short like this.
Maybe, you could…[Read more]
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ClaireC replied to the topic A Year Ago… in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99. YAY!!! A whole year! So glad you joined us. 🙂 And it really is wonderful how much you can learn in the bestistest place on the internet! Happy KP-versary!
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic The Writerly Adventures of Jenna Trapperton in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@Dekreel This is great. XD And I agree with @ClaireC, the small installments are nice; makes it easier to read and in one sitting. 😉
@PerfectFifths If you really could cut in perfect fifths that would be quite a feat.
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Joy replied to the topic Poems and Songs by Ariella in the forum Poetry 8 years, 6 months ago
@ariella-newheart I love those!! I think I like the first one best 😀
… Oh, wow. I’m the only non-Aethasian you tagged *smirks in amusement*
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Joy replied to the topic Question in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 8 years, 6 months ago
@hannah-c I would! I admire charm and humor in an autobiography 🙂
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Joy replied to the topic Hi, I'm Ari! in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 6 months ago
@ariella-newheart Have fun! XD
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Joy replied to the topic Free verse Poem Advice/Critique in the forum Poetry 8 years, 6 months ago
@gh24682468999 I love it! It’s pretty!
The only thing I would do is make it easier to understand. Because I’m not quite grasping the message 🙂
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Joy replied to the topic Kingdom Pen Captions in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
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Grace H. replied to the topic Comic Poem Tag Experiment in the forum Poetry 8 years, 6 months ago
@rochellaine These poems are hilarious. Thanks for starting this! 😀 😀 😀
I screeched at Stan
Like a mother bear
But all he said was “Well There
Please keep your hair
I put that hole in your blanket
Now I go for a chair”
@sam-kowal @dragon-snapper NO ONE HAS MENTIONED how funny “Now I go for a chair” is. That is most definitely the best par…[Read more]
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Grace H. started the topic Free verse Poem Advice/Critique in the forum Poetry 8 years, 6 months ago
Hey everyone,
I wrote a poem today for my writing class, and its free verse, but sort of structured. Here are the first two stanzas:
What can ever substitute
for shushed hysterics in the wee hours of the morning
those conspiratorial smiles across the hallway
and those times when nothing need be said — the silence
only broken by taps and…[Read more]
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ClaireC replied to the topic The Writerly Adventures of Jenna Trapperton in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@dekreel, good work. 🙂 I like the small installments.
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Joy replied to the topic Kingdom Pen Captions in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
Compilations of some of my favorite screenshots of @aratrea and @the-real-kapeefer


@sierra-r @epicaddie2 @rochellaine @corissa-maiden-of-praise @dragon-snapper @anyone
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Joy replied to the topic The Writerly Adventures of Jenna Trapperton in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
The Gif Hiders
Part Two: The Bird and her Cake
The Kingdom of Pen did grow weirder and weirder for Jenna, but only gradually. After a few days, ever since she had come, she had met some centaurs, a mermaid, another dragon, a tiger, and even a droid. But the weirdness didn’t exactly just rocket into the air until about three weeks after she had f…[Read more]
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Joy replied to the topic PRAYER REQUESTS #2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 6 months ago
@skredder Aww! I just said a little prayer for her! God bless her! 🙁
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