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@That_Writer_Girl_99 My pleasure. XD

@That_Writer_Girl_99 Yay!!! Congratulations, and may you reap the goodness of KP for many more years. 😉 D’ye remember our first conversation? It was regarding Luke Skywalker and whether or not he’s whiny. XD

Ooh. I love this! @gh24682468999 I really love poetry. For free verse, it’s actually much easier to edit, because you don’t need to worry about the structure and keeping the rhyme.

To revise, I would make sure that the words are clear and concise. Choose your wording very carefully, especially with something short like this.

Maybe, you could…[Read more]

@that_writer_girl_99. YAY!!! A whole year! So glad you joined us. 🙂 And it really is wonderful how much you can learn in the bestistest place on the internet! Happy KP-versary!

@Dekreel This is great. XD And I agree with @ClaireC, the small installments are nice; makes it easier to read and in one sitting. 😉

@PerfectFifths If you really could cut in perfect fifths that would be quite a feat.

@ariella-newheart  I love those!! I think I like the first one best 😀

… Oh, wow. I’m the only non-Aethasian you tagged *smirks in amusement*

@hannah-c  I would! I admire charm and humor in an autobiography 🙂

@ariella-newheart  Have fun! XD

@gh24682468999  I love it! It’s pretty!

The only thing I would do is make it easier to understand. Because I’m not quite grasping the message 🙂

@ingridrd  *bows*

@aratrea  Yeah, sorry, I should have considered this would happen XD *nervous giggle*

@rochellaine These poems are hilarious. Thanks for starting this! 😀 😀 😀

I screeched at Stan

Like a mother bear

But all he said was “Well There

Please keep your hair

I put that hole in your blanket

Now I go for a chair”

@sam-kowal @dragon-snapper NO ONE HAS MENTIONED how funny “Now I go for a chair” is. That is most definitely the best par…[Read more]

@dekreel, good work. 🙂 I like the small installments.

Compilations of some of my favorite screenshots of @aratrea and @the-real-kapeefer

@sierra-r  @epicaddie2  @rochellaine  @corissa-maiden-of-praise  @dragon-snapper  @anyone

The Gif Hiders

Part Two: The Bird and her Cake

The Kingdom of Pen did grow weirder and weirder for Jenna, but only gradually. After a few days, ever since she had come, she had met some centaurs, a mermaid, another dragon, a tiger, and even a droid. But the weirdness didn’t exactly just rocket into the air until about three weeks after she had f…[Read more]

@skredder  Aww! I just said a little prayer for her! God bless her! 🙁

@dragon-snapper, uuuuuummmmmmmm.

yeah.

I’m not going to be much help with this, cause I do the same thing.

One of the things I’ve found helpful is, like @daeus said, insert hope. Your characters should be driven by their goals.

Unless your MC is like mine, who is just plain hurting and miserable, and kind of takes it out on everyone else.…[Read more]

@ariella-newheart  KP videos… Well I really like the How to Write the Worst ….. Ever series, so definitely watch those. They don’t have to be in order (for the record, my two favorites are Allegory and Dystopian. The former is when the word “Kapeefer” got started)

Sooo… Long story short, it doesn’t matter where you start just WATCH THEM ALL!

@notawriter  Actually he said “mid back,” not mid black X)