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BlueJay replied to the topic Anna's Savanna by BlueJay in the forum Short Story Critiques 10 years, 5 months ago
Yep that would work. I could even mention a check list here. Thank you. 😀 😉 And “check” would work.
So glad you enjoyed it. It is definitely one of my favourites. 😀 -
BlueJay replied to the topic I'd love your help with this poem in the forum Poetry Critiques 10 years, 5 months ago
Thank you all. I have pretty much figured out what to do. Do you think that (based upon Disney Aladdin) would they have had stalls/shops like that in Noah’s day? I have no idea how to find out. What are your views?
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 5 months ago
I’m available if anyone wants to write with me? @anna-brie, @daeus, @lightningmouse
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Greta replied to the topic Let's write a story! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years, 5 months ago
Oh dear, @kate-flournoy! Since your’s is after mine, the next person writing can just go off of your’s. 🙂
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Greta replied to the topic Let's write a story! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years, 5 months ago
What was this guy’s problem? All I wanted was answers to my questions. I’d only just lost all my memories, and he wasn’t even a little sympathetic.
“You know, I’m getting sick of your evasiveness. Thou art–” I cover my mouth. Where was the Old English coming from?
Gavin smirks at me. “Fairytales aren’t real, eh? Just watch and see.”
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 6 months ago
I could do it tomorrow anywhere from 1:30-3:30 pm EST.
@daeus We will still be asleep then, if I have figured this out right. Your 1:00pm will be our 4:00am. I know, we sleep sooooo late. 😀 So I guess for us Aussies, we’ll just have to play it be ear and see if anyone is awake when we are. (*Bother different time zones*)
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 6 months ago
Oh and one other thing, when you post something, look at the time. That is American not ours. See my last post was 10:25pm yet it is 1:26pm our time.
@daeus, I don’t know how you’re still awake?!? I so need sleep. (I love sleeping in… 🙂 ) -
BlueJay replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 6 months ago
@anna-brie How about we start at 2:00pm (aus) 😛
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 6 months ago
No problem at all. We can try tomorrow. (Sleep well tonight. 😀 )
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BlueJay replied to the topic Anna's Savanna by BlueJay in the forum Short Story Critiques 10 years, 6 months ago
@aratrea If you have the time, I’ve love your feedback with the rest of the story. 😀
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BlueJay replied to the topic Battle Power in the forum Fantasy 10 years, 6 months ago
This just keeps making me think of Prince Caspian and the underground fight. That scene is done so well, with Caspian and Peter counting. Maybe there is something there that will help.
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BlueJay replied to the topic Limericks in the forum Poetry 10 years, 6 months ago
There once was a lizard called Ted.
Who lived in an old tin shed.
His head was dark blue,
And his tail was too,
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BlueJay replied to the topic Let's write a story! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years, 6 months ago
“Wren?” I was stunned. “Wren, like the bird?”
“Yes.”
“Oh.” I thought I might have had a better name then that. Still I can vaguely remember liking it.
“Dad use to called me his Jenny Wren,” I cry, triumphantly.
Gavin nods and smiles.
“I’m starting to remember,” I crow.
“Good,” said Gavin.
“Now what?” I ask.
Gavin looks at me.
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 6 months ago
Or even 0:45 – 0:60?
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BlueJay posted an update 10 years, 6 months ago
Let your light so shine before men, that they may see your good works and glorify your Father in heaven. Matthew 5:16
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writer's Corner in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 6 months ago
Sounds like fun @lightningmouse. Do you want to try it for 15min with me? Maybe from 0:35 – 0:50?
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BlueJay replied to the topic I'd love your help with this poem in the forum Poetry Critiques 10 years, 6 months ago
Oops. Try you again. @cahndida-serkhaman
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BlueJay replied to the topic I'd love your help with this poem in the forum Poetry Critiques 10 years, 6 months ago
oops. Try you agian. @cahndida-serkhaman
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BlueJay replied to the topic I'd love your help with this poem in the forum Poetry Critiques 10 years, 6 months ago
Question: (@spradlin, @daeus, @cahndida serkhaman, @jadamae, @sarah-h)
If you were illustrating this for a child, how would you illustrate this verse.In a land long ago,
When men were all bad,
They stole and they murdered,
Which made the Lord sad.I obviously don’t want to scare them, with people killing people, but I don’t want to make the…[Read more]
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BlueJay replied to the topic I'd love your help with this poem in the forum Poetry Critiques 10 years, 6 months ago
@spradlin Come and check this poem out. What do you think?
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