@sleepwalkingmk
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BlueJay replied to the topic Welcome Says Me! in the forum Start HERE 10 years ago
Very easy if you know who you want @gideon-sowdon. Well, let me rephrase that. It can actually be quite hard as people had different tags to their names.
Perhaps you can tell me and I’ll tag them for you. I’ve been on KP for around 9 months so I think I’ve memorized everyone who is active on here.
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years ago
@sarah-h I would love to write but my little sister (well, she’s actually taller) is begging me to play with her. I should be available around 6pm-7pm if that fits in with you. 🙂 Hmm…let me find out what time that would be for you. 1:00am-2:00am for you. 🙂
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BlueJay replied to the topic Bible Challenge in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years ago
@sarah-h I have acted in three musicals. Well, two were pantomimes. Aladdin was my favourite but it wasn’t the usual story. We rewrite it so that we don’t need to get the rights.
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years ago
Here you go… 🙂 This is what I’ve been working on. @jess
Glinting eyes, watching eyes,
Waiting for a maiden.
Glinting eyes, watching eyes,
To come into its haven.Long white teeth, sharp white teeth,
Shining in the dark.
Long white teeth, sharp white teeth,
Scarier than a shark.A puff of smoke, a curl of smoke,
Floating through the air.
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years ago
Here you go… 🙂 This is what I’ve been working on.
Glinting eyes, watching eyes,
Waiting for a maiden.
Glinting eyes, watching eyes,
To come into its haven.Long white teeth, sharp white teeth,
Shining in the dark.
Long white teeth, sharp white teeth,
Scarier than a shark.A puff of smoke, a curl of smoke,
Floating through the air.
A puff of…[Read more] -
BlueJay replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years ago
@jess I got another verse written and my sister and I are plotting for a story idea that we are working on together. 🙂
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years ago
@jess Yes, I can write for half an hour. Ready…set…write!!!
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years ago
@jess Yes, I can write for half an hour. Ready…set…write!!!
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years ago
@jess Let me see and I’ll get back to you. I might continue or well….I guess I might not. 🙂 I’ll let you know.
Btw @overcomer & @dragon-snapper I got four verses written for a poem about a dragon. (Here is one I wrote just for you @dragon-snapper)With no place to sit, ‘cept on the floor.
Our hearing goes due to her roar.
The call log on t…[Read more] -
BlueJay replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years ago
@dragon-snapper @overcomer You guys did it AGAIN! Creepy!!!!
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years ago
@dragon-snapper Thanks for the ideas. I’ll see what I can come up with. 🙂 (And I actually have done a poem in the shape of a Man on the cross. 🙂 )
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years ago
@dragon-snapper I did that once and wrote a poem in the shape of a light bulb.
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years ago
@dragon-snapper Yes, well, no. Well, ahem…ahem… I’d like to, but I’m unsure of what to write about. I am sitting with my laptop on my lap, so I’m thinking. Does that count? 😉
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years ago
especially considering we’re in opposite sides of the world
Aren’t you both in America? @overcomer @dragon-snapper
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Plot help please! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years ago
Me too, @Jess. 🙂
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BlueJay replied to the topic Plot help please! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years ago
@jess I just thought I’d hunt up a few names for you, as you seemed to be struggling. (that doesn’t mean you can’t use Tessa. I don’t mind. 🙂 )
Girls: Natalie, Rosa, Alyssa, Colleen, Kaylee or Kayla, Amber, Cassidy (Cass) Mya or Mia.
Boys: Jax, (I like that one) Tyler, Dylan, Kyle, Carlos, Cody or Coby, Derek, Xavier (pronounced with a Z at the…[Read more] -
Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Plot help please! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years ago
Hey, that’s @BlueJay ‘s name! 🙂 🙂 🙂
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Plot help please! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years ago
Remember: Premise is what makes the readers pick up the book. Plot is what keeps them reading. Character is what makes them pick up the book a second time. And for the record I find that I always remember the characters most.
Yes, yes, yes.
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Emma Flournoy replied to the topic Plot help please! in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 10 years ago
Gotcha @Jess.
I’m thinking that instead of the typical overthrow, they reconcile in some exciting, entertaining way.
That is an extremely creative idea! That could be so good; I can’t recall having seen it in a story before.And I 200% agree with your philosophy for dealing with your ideas already being taken—‘Well, I’ll just have to make min…[Read more]
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BlueJay replied to the topic Writers' Corner 2 in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years ago
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