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@Daeus That’s great. 🙂 Only thing I’d say more is maybe have a stronger verb than encounter for the ‘he encounters tangled plots…’ stuff. I see why you changed it, ’cause one can hardly plummet into bandits; but just ‘encounters’ is a little unexciting.

And actually, reading the other one again, I like it better as ‘plummets’, without the…[Read more]

@Daeus That’s great. 🙂 Only thing I’d say more is maybe have a stronger verb than encounter for the ‘he encounters tangled plots…’ stuff. I see why you changed it, ’cause one can hardly plummet into bandits; but just ‘encounters’ is a little unexciting.

@dragon-snapper
I haven’t been on here lately, but thank you all the same. Merry Christmas to you, as well!

Alrighty @hannah-krynicki. I am SO sorry about the long wait again. I sincerely hope I didn’t hold up your writing process. Why don’t you send me all your questions, I’ll answer the ones I can, and send the rest to my British friends? That is, assuming you still need the questions answered. 😀 Again, I’m SO sorry about the wait.

Actually, wait…I just looked at the email you sent again @his-instrument. For some reason, I was thinking the Writer’s Gathering was on January 7. However, if it’s on the 21st, I might (just might) be able to make it. It’s about 1 hour and 30 minutes from where I live. Let me ask my mom and I’ll let you know. 😀

I’m SO sorry I haven’t responded to this until now @his-instrument! Ahh, I feel so bad. This past semester has been so crazy school-wise…It’s been insane. But that’s no excuse for not responding! I’m really sorry! Anyway, about the writing gathering…unfortunately, I don’t think I can make it. So sorry, and thanks so much for trying to…[Read more]

@Daeus That is cool. Those buildings! I love them.

I think your name would look better the same sort of color as the title, but darker; and also what Hope said—the fonts do look a little mismatched.
Though actually…I think it’ll be great once you change the name color, without changing the font.
And the stuff about the rain too.

The title…[Read more]

@Jess that’s kind of neat.

@Ethryndal Will do. 🙂

@Jess praying lots!
He designed the machine they’re using for his surgery?!

Yay, it worked.

@Daeus These three sentences

Matthew returns years later with wealth and power, ready to fulfill his vengeance. Assuming the mysterious guise of Edwin Brook he begins his struggle for justice. Uncanny events, however, keep thwarting his every move.

sound choppy to me.
Too ‘this, and this. Then this, and this. Then this.’ I think it would…[Read more]

Yes people, seriously. It so needs you to watch it. WAY exceeded my expectations.

@Daeus Oh gracious, that was dumb. *headdesk*

@I-J-Anderson There!

I’m sorry…dunno what’s goin’ on. 😛

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That’s the right tag but it didn’t work…lemme try again.

I-J-Anderson

I-J-Anderson Well if the book was written well, there won’t be a long, clunky, awkward description. 😛

I prefer to get my picture of the character from reading the book, not by an actual picture. It just seems more real to me that way. I could like looking at pictures of characters after I already have my own head picture, but not to get my perception.

@Ethryndal Definitely. I sure hope she’s able to do it.

I know I put a link up above, but here’s the same video insert in my post. Enjoy!