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@supermonkey42 Personally, if I were reading that story, it would be less confusing if the third person part was obviously narrated by your main character. If the main character also adds his/her own thoughts during their narration of the story, it help, too (“Bob lunged forward to get the piece of cake, which I think was the stupidest thing he…[Read more]

@Ethryndal *grins* And that is an encouraging thought.

*revives you*

That makes sense. And I kindly forgive your grammar. *benevolent flourish*

This story is going to be so epic.

Um… @0-0enyali0-0

@daughteroftheking  Congrats!! See you later! 😉

WHEW! I’ve done it! The new and improved Aethasia! *slams map on table* What do you think? anything else I need to change?

@lady-iliara  @aislinn-mollisong  @silverclaw-bonnetfolly  @destiny  @O-O-enyali-O-O @other-aethasians

@daughteroftheking  Sounds like a lot to me! Honestly I could barely do 50 words a day!

@daughteroftheking You can do it!! How many words do you have?

@daughteroftheking  Hmm… I think I’ll go over my KPA plans (yet again.) I think I have pre-writer’s-block-writer’s block 😛 lol. What about you?

@daughteroftheking  I don’t know about @winter-rose… But I’m here!

Okayyy, that was a bit long and complicated…

@supermonkey42  It can be confusing if the story isn’t written with good transisions in between 1st and 3rd person. Since the story is mainly in 1st person, I think it should be based upon what the character knows.

When you have a section that’s in 3rd person, you could have the character say, “While I was doing this or while I was at that place…[Read more]

@emily Yeah, I’m excited to announce it. 🙂  Wel, I’m going to sign off from here, but I’ll still be around the kingdom 😉

Thanks, @sam-kowal! Oh, and sorry about your furniture XD  Ever considered making an allowance just for furniture for times like these?

WHOA, Stan, what a fire! I think it is a record!

@emily Okay. I have officially chosen the main characters… So yeah, very productive XD

@emily Hello! Yes, I’m still here

IMPORTANT ANNOUNCEMENT: I have selected three main characters for the KPA!

Presenting…

@princessfoo, @sam-kowal and Stan!!

Sorry to both of you for any inconsistensies in this drawing. 🙂

All the rest of you will be supporting characters, all in an army, like Bilbo and the dwarves! I will do my best to make all your characters as big…[Read more]

Thanks @lady-iliara, @0-0enyali0-0 and @destiny!

@epicaddie2  @princessfoo  Anyway I could improve my Araluen? Landmarks? Climate? Size? Cities?

@seekjustice  @that_writer_girl_99  @winter-rose  @daughteroftheking  Anyone around? I’m making more plans for my KPA

@Ethryndal I LOVE IT. O.o Now I have to pick which version is the best. Yay. I like the first one best, with the phrasing of all the stuff, but as you’ve already been told and are fixing, it’s too long and gives away too much information. Sooo…

I think I like the first one in your latest post best, but with these differences: keep this version…[Read more]

@Daeus WHAHOO!