Skredder

@skredder I told you before that I thought the idea was a good one. 🙂  The opening you posted sounds great, except for the fact that in the very first couple of sentences I had to read them several times before I figured out who was talking.  I thought the little six-year-old girl was the one who had been gone, which obviously wouldn’t make s…[Read more]

Hey @skredder! Sounds like an intriguing idea you’ve got here! I’d tell you to go for it, but it looks like you’ve already got all the help you’ll need. 😉

@skredder yeah it’s nice to have family you can trust to kinda critique our work ❤

@skredder I really like the idea! I read the beginning you posted too.👍 Garrett is actually my brother’s name, so, therefore, I like it. 😉

@skredder  If you haven’t checked out the Writers’ Corner yet, you should do it! Kinda get a feel about what kind of topic this is, ya know.

@skredder  @jenwriter17  @sam-kowal  @supermonkey42

Wait, hang on, this isn’t what I meant, actually. You know in the Writers Corner, you sign in when you’re currently writing and chat with others? That’s what this is. You sign in, talk about what you’re currently reading at that moment, talk about life, etc.

Sorry!

@skredder XD Nice. That sounds like something I would dive into eagerly, and then…slowly…get tired…of.

@jenwriter17 That is super cool! XD I would love to have gone to church with an author, just because of all the writing questions I could have asked in the parking lot. I haven’t heard of Merlin’s Blade, but I think I’ll go look it up 😉

@skredder Sounds… informative. 🙂 I was recently reading about the rise of capitalism in the industrial revolution, and it was interesting to see how it evolved into its current form.

@skredder 🙂 Well, I guess you can tell us about it if you want

@skredder Umm… is it an interesting textbook? 😉

@skredder  Makes sense. I’ll see if I can make it more clear 🙂

@skredder  Haha, thanks! I’m glad you liked it!

Do you think you could tell me (or show me) where you were confused about who was talking? Feel free to point them out in comments and I’ll change them! Or just tell me here X)

Hey guys! So I’m going to reuse an OLD thread and post my updated story snippet for you guys to critique. To make it clear, this is my Doctor Who fan novella. You don’t have to be a Whovian to read it. I’m excited about it because I recently started changing it to first person instead of third. Here is what I have so far!

@theacornman  @pickupyour…[Read more]

@skredder Ooh, digital art! That’s cool 🙂
do you find digital art to be  easier or harder for you?
Also, cute drawing!

@skredder Thanks! I’ll continue to look for ways I can make my story more unique.

@aratrea I’ll look forward to that video!!!

@notawriter Kay would skydive into the ocean to scuba dive. *cough* She’s very outgoing. (She’s an unwatchable thief)

@perfectfifths cooking… I think. I don’t think she’s very musical.

@dragon-snapper command an army. (She kinda of already leads a massive con organization…)

@itisastarrynight insect. They are edible.

@rochellaine Why?!…[Read more]

@dragon-snapper Command an army. And Link blew up the melted-remelted chair.

@itisastarrynight Insects.

@rochellaine Probably stories. My character doesn’t seem like much of a reader. 😛

@skredder Probably know exactly where they are without speaking the language.

@dekreel TV

Would your character rather have terrible short-term memory, or…[Read more]

@notawriter  The Doctor would rather go sky-diving

@perfectfifths  Probably an instrument

@dragon-snapper  Leaf gutters, hands down

@itisastarrynight  Probably an insect

@rochellaine  Never read or hear stories again

@skredder  Know where she is in a place with a foreign language

Would your character rather be forced to climb a hundr…[Read more]

@skredder That’s actually a realistic question for Chara, because she gets disoriented very easily. 🙂  She would probably rather know where she is in a place where she can’t speak the language, because she can take care of herself as long as she doesn’t get disoriented.

I actually saw a really cool episode of an anthology show from the 1950s…[Read more]