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@ariella-newheart  Good question! I have struggled with the exact same thing in my KPA (that’s Kapeefer Adventure, sort of like the LOKD). I guess it depends on the series: How long it is, and when and where your MC(s) are traveling. If you have to put in all your recurring characters, you could either alter the characters so they fit each scene,…[Read more]

Sorry we missed you @skredder!

@christi-eaton  No, I haven’t…

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Sci-fi books that you’d recommend, anyone? I seriously need to read more of it… Oh! Or Steampunk! I’ve never read Steampunk and I really want to. Unless it isn’t a book genre……

@winter-rose  @dragon-snapper  You guys are a hoot! XD

I’m writing! 🙂

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@skredder Oh okay. But still, I really liked it! Maybe you could try publishing your book on KP? (Wow. I say that to a lot of people.

@gh24682468999 Agreed…I can safely say that Tug and Abelard (Arbelard? How do you spell it again… 😅) plus Sable are my favorite characters. And maybe Will, Evanlyn, and Horace! Hmm… interesting!

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I really liked it! The only thing I want to point out is that in this sentence
“From past “research”, Cassandra knew that there were always two night-guards standing by the single-person door that lead to the woods, along with at least six guards at all times watching the main gate into the castle”

Maybe the word you want is …[Read more]

@skredder Yes, the confusion is cleared up now. Thanks 🙂

@warrenluther04 Yes!! The series is really awesome (it’s one of my favorites), and there are more people on this forum that like it than you’d think.

@skredder No worries! I’m not in any huge hurry, I can’t wait to see it when it’s done though!

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I’m going to see if I can write (Rochellaine — before TNG comes on TV ;D)

@skredder, @daughteroftheking, Thank you. 🙂

@epicaddie, @daughteroftheking, @skredder, @ingridrd, @dragon-snapper,

I have a praise point!

Last night a really big storm passed through our area. I really love the beauty of a storm, in fact my favourite kind of day is a rainy or stormy one.

Last night, though we were playing sport on the football field at the end of our street, and the…[Read more]

@skredder I’m sorry I didn’t get back to you sooner.  I’m glad you figured out what I meant.

I had that same problem recently… 😀  I’ve found that line breakers really help when I want to suddenly change thoughts.

The added section at the ending is perfect!  It makes a lot more sense now.

@gh24682468999 Hey! Another person (besides me) who has read Ranger’s Apprentice!!!!!! (Sorry, it’s a really good series in my opinion.)

Oh…um…sorry, that was totally off-topic for this forum.

@skredder I like it! So is this a part of a story, or a stand alone one?

@skredder I liked it! I think the dynamic between Casse and Aldred is really sweet. (I have to admit, at the beginning the name Cassandra threw me off, because in Ranger’s Apprentice the princess is named Cassandra, and she does sneak out at night, too.)

I share the problem mentioned earlier, though, in that it’s a bit confusing at the end. Maybe…[Read more]

@Skredder It’s on my reading list for next week!

@Rochellaine Ohh! Yes, I do, actually. I’ve been listening to Ella Fitzgerald recently. 😀

@notawriter Thank you! I like K.M. Weiland and Lemony Snicket. Also — I have to ask about your username. XD

@introvert_girl Thanks! My favorite colors are all shades of pink, light purple, and teal, in…[Read more]

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Sorry! Had to run and do a chemistry lab XP  But I’m back! Anyone still here?

Oh, and Rochellaine, congrats on becoming a Knight in Shining Armor! You earned it fast! 😉

@skredder I really liked it!  The description felt very real, and the voices of the characters were good.

A couple of things:  One, you switched POVs a couple of times during the course of the story, and it was hard to keep up.  I think you should at least put a double paragraph break in between so it’s obvious you’re starting a new section, or…[Read more]

@skredder  KPA again. I’m getting to a part about Jane the Pizza Ninja. It’s not helping that I’m starving XD

What genre is Clouded Fury?

@skredder  Eyy! What are you working on?