Skredder

@skredder Looks much better now!  The sentence you used as an explanation for Casse does it’s duty, but is a bit ungrammatical…And I missed one of the POV changes which can be fixed if you just change two words.

If you check the document one more time you’ll see a couple of new comments.  Other than those, I think it’s great!  Can’t wait to re…[Read more]

@skredder Ohh… Intriging.
@ariella-newheart Nice. Hmmm… She has the same name as you.
Did you draw her?

Okay, @skredder I’ve made a few comments indicating where you changed POVs.

I have a couple more comments to make.  One is that you usually capitalize “Prince” even when you’re not using it as a noun but as an adjective.  The only time I’ve seen “prince” capitalized except as a name like “Prince John” is when the writer is speaking about the “…[Read more]

@skredder Yes, it works!  I’ll make a few comments.

@skredder There are a couple places where it’s better, but there’s still quite a bit of “head-hopping” going on. Sorry.  🙂  Would you be able to post it in an “edit” link so that I could comment on the places where it changes POV?  That would be a lot easier than trying to explain it all here on the forum.

Oh, I just want to say that reading ab…[Read more]

@that_writer_girl_99 @princessfoo @skredder @mnvalentine @jenwriter17 @dragon-snapper @kaya-young @kate-flournoy @daughteroftheking

Okay, let me put this a different way. Would you say you want to reach thousands of readers with your books or are you sold out on doing so?

@that_writer_girl_99 @princessfoo @skredder @mnvalentine @jenwriter17 @dragon-snapper @kaya-young @kate-flournoy @daughteroftheking

Okay, second question: do you plan to become an established author?

@skredder     Well, I know what I’m reading next now.

Sometimes plan it out by writing two or three pages of the start to the end.  Other times I plan out approximately what’s going to happen (like what someone might call a spoiler, and I plan plot twists and things,) but don’t plan the end most of the time.  I don’t know how others do it though…[Read more]

@ashlyvye  According to a Buzzfeed quiz, I am Ravenclaw, Again. But it didn’t show a percentage 😉

@skredder  YES! I’m excited about the Wrinkle in Time movie, too! The trailers look amazing

Hi there! I’m readin’ my history book 😐 anyone on to join me?

@warrenluther04 @rochellaine @dekreel @dragon-snapper @mariposa @skredder @sam-kowal @clairec

@skredder    I’m usually not a fan of Historical Fiction as well.  In fact, when I told my friend I didn’t like history, in general, she sorta freaked out.   I’ve been told A Wrinkle in Time is one I should read several times, how far through are you?

@skredder  Wowza!  I love it.

@dekreel      How have you never watched Marvel!?!?  They are EVERYWHERE.  I… I just… *sigh* Wow.                           I sometimes like singing, yeah.  I’m also learning to play the piano and guitar.  I enjoy listening to all kinds of music (Christan, Christan, Christan, and Christan music, to be specific) but my favorite artists are…[Read more]

@skredder @dekreel is right.  The colors in your collage are AMAZING!

@seekjustice  @skredder  @daughteroftheking  Thank you all so much! <3

@seekjustice  @audrey-caylin  @jenwriter17  @clairec  @skredder  @rochellaine

Greetings! I’m at the KPA again. Getting to a fun part… *rubs paws together deviously*

@seekjustice  @skredder  @salome01w4g  @epicaddie2  @daughteroftheking @anyone

So I mentioned a few months ago that my dad is out of a job. So now I have a praise and a request

The praise: Dad has just found a part-time job!! Sure, it’s part time, but it’s a job!!

The request: My mom had gotten a part-time job as well, a few months ago, but she…[Read more]

@skredder  WHOA. Look at all the colors! It’s awesome 😀

What program did you use?

@skredder By the way, how would you get someone to beta-read a story? Is it just what you did, posting the link of the Google Doc onto the forum? Or would you give certain people Comment Only access? I have a story that I’d like advice on, so would that count as a beta-read? Sorry for the random question…

Hey all! Yesterday’s chosen one was @pickupyourpenandwrite! Congrats!

A new week means all new opportunities to get your name into the newsletter! Want to share writing advice with your fellow KeePers? Simply respond to this thread and you’re entered in our little contest!

Starting this week, include your blog in your post, and the weekly…[Read more]