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@jenwriter17 The specific loose ends were what exactly happened to her parents, the experiments Takara wanted to run on Rin, and the relationship between Takara and her parents. Oh, also how well Takara knows Taro.

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1. I really can’t decide between Uma and Rin, but I think I’m leaning more towards Uma. She has this mix of child-like mentality with such a quiet aura.

2. Whenever Rin was talking with Takara. I just really loved those interactions!

3. The fight at the end was confusing. I couldn’t envision it and the way it read felt like both…[Read more]

@jenwriter17 Okay. I’m still working on getting the comments done.

@daughteroftheking Nice! 😀

@jenwriter17 I finished reading it! Most of my comments are going to have to wait til tomorrow though.

@ariel-ashira Definitely praying!

@ingridrd Thanks. 🙂 Yours are pretty cool! 😀

@jenwriter17 @seekjustice Alright, here’s part 15.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1OzPEMCng2eUTOTbRsQLQSMETCvgJt08PwGVX5C_-CCQ/edit?usp=sharing

@jenwriter17 Here’s the collage for Aldred.

@jenwriter17 Yes! That link worked! Oh, that looks excellent!

@jenwriter17 Sorry, but the link didn’t work. Um, this is somewhat cheating, but maybe if you screenshot it?

@jenwriter17 Now I want to make a collage for Aldred! 🙂

@jenwriter17 *jumps up and down* 😀

@jenwriter17 Oh, good collages!

I can’t decide which character I like more: Rin or Uma?

Now I’m trying to imagine what a Takara collage would look like. 🙂

@jenwriter17  Thanks! I seem to recall that you once made a collage for Uma, didn’t you? By the way, I am worried about her!

@jenwriter17 Found it!

@jenwriter17 I did make one collage for Casse. Gimme a couple of minutes to find it.

@jenwriter17 Oh, that’s fine then. 🙂

@jenwriter17 Oh! They’re in the same cell? Now, that’s interesting!

@jenwriter17 Sure! I’ll go first.

There were a few times on her way to the armory that she had to climb out a window and hang onto the sill while guards marched passed. Once they had gone by, she pulled herself back into the castle. It was always a risk to do that should a guard outside happen to look up. It was a risk Casse had to take.