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@audrey-caylin  Haikus are the easiest thing to write ever! They don’t have to rhyme, but the syllables have to be in a specific pattern. It’s easier than it sounds, and it’s SO fun! You should try it 🙂

@audrey-caylin  It’s going okay! I’m on chapter 4. Progress at last!

Actually right now I’m writing haikus. I’m thinking of maybe publishing a collection of haikus on KP if I’m allowed

@audrey-caylin  Hi!!

Depends, how much does he like chocolate? X)

Annnd I’m back! And I brought fresh, chocolate-covered pretzels! Want some? 😉

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@dekreel I really like Alfred’s voice, which is especially important in something told in first person. 😉
My tops tips are to be really sensitive to the five senses. While these details are important in any POV, I think it can really shine in first. Especially touch/textures, taste and smells, which I find are often overlooked.
Also, first is a…[Read more]

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I’m writing! I think. I might get distracted. Who knows… I’m here, anyways 🙂

@salome01w4g  Ohh, I’m so thankful! That has to be one of the most dramatic Christmas stories ever! The perfect gift: a place to live! 😉 Praise God!

@ingridrd  @gabbyj  Thank you! I had fun with both of them 🙂

@dragon-snapper Michael would probably choose a political celebration, just because a Christmas party would potentially be very awkward. He has a rocky relationship with his family, and he doesn’t have many close friends.
@perfectfifths He’d rather fight a dragon than be one. (Especially a greedy dragon.)
@catwing Michael’s not a huge animal…[Read more]

@his-instrument My thoughts are that in the opening chapters, you want to be intentional about showing the reader what the tone of your story is, so they know what to expect. If the dark/sad elements in the beginning are conveying that, it may not be a problem. Unless you just want the story to be lighter in tone overall. In that case, I find the…[Read more]

@daughteroftheking  @salome01w4g  As am I, actually! Me too, please!  And N.C. I’ll definitely pray for you 😉

@his-instrument  I love the storyline!

It does sound kind of dark. Maybe you could like spread out the dark a little bit…?

Anyway, sure! I’ll read it. 🙂

Someone who has more experience with plot line might be of more use, though…

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(P.S. This is comple…[Read more]

Oh, no!! 🙁 🙁 🙁

Oh, great. Now you’re making me nervous about cars! ;P

Praying hard!! *big hug*

@seekjustice  I might have not seen it the first time. *shrug* Anyway, thank you!!

@daeus  @introvert_girl  Okay thanks! 🙂

@catwing  Not bad! My favorite line: “I can cut your cake into perfect fifths! The most perfect fifths!”

LOLOL!

@catwing YAYYY! Your KPA!

@seekjustice  Can I see your blog please? 😀