Silverclaw Bonnetfolly

@ingridrd  @daughteroftheking  @xonos-darkgrate  @catwing

“Doh! Get it?”

Hint: It’s not the Simpsons

@alia  Sorry I didn’t reply sooner!

The line “Must tell the Jolly old elf” in particular should be longer. Maybe “I must report now to the Jolly old elf.”

In general, the more similar the poem lines in a poem are in terms of syllables, the more beautiful the poem as a whole will be. So maybe you could lengthen/shorten all your lines to the same…[Read more]

Oh, and I just saw your walking robot animation. I loved the lighting and “camerawork!”

@leumeister  I am interested in animation because my Dad is a computer geek! I understand the term “vector graphics,” because of him! I don’t know who else knows what that is XD  Can you remind me what “armature” means? I can’t believe I don’t remember!

The only little animation I’ve done is stop-motion. I’ve done it with LEGOs, drawings, and e…[Read more]

@leumeister  Of those two I would pick Tristan — I like that name (if I haven’t mentioned before) 🙂

@mariposa  Well, sci-fi doesn’t have anything to do with KP, soooooooooo…

@mariposa  AAAH! Don’t steal my thunder!!!!

It’s still awesome! 😉

@sleepwalkingmk *grins ear to ear* This is so sweet!! Let’s see… I like how you set the scene, but I also think you should spend more time talking about what the narrator is thinking. It’s a little idle right now, talking mostly about the things going on around her. It’s still awesome though! Also, “a while” is one word: “awhile.” 🙂

Nice job!! 😉

@xonos-darkgrate  My dad was laid off too! We’re in this together!! 😁😉 Anyways, yeah I’ll definitely pray for you!

@ingridrd  I missed this 😛  Nice! I like how you showed the different backgrounds 🙂

@leumeister  Well, we know for sure that the green one’s name is Rafael 😀

@epicaddie2 Continuing to pray! <3

@alia This is cute! I like the story! I think you could tweak some of the lines, so they don’t sound too short and choppy, but other than that, it’s awesome 🙂

@cindygreen Good idea! Why didn’t I think of that?!

@supermonkey42  @princessfoo Thank you!! 😉

@ingridrd  *licks chops* Ooh! Is it that good that it deserves cake?? 😀

@leumeister I like Camille, Raphael, and Tristan. Tristan is one of my favorite names!

@amy-l-klob  You’re very welcome! Yes, exactly! I love how deep it sounds, her normal life being “separated” from her. I have to agree that a good background is essential for that!

Anyway, I’m glad I could help! What is your novel about, if I may ask? (If not, that’s okay 🙂 )

@daughteroftheking  Thank you!! Good to know I’m not the only nerd here! B-)

Good point! Not a lot of people would want the “gollums goll’ming…” Or the “Daleks screaming” XD Well, I suppose the light sabers are good for that! 😛

@seekjustice  Are you still around?

@perfectfifths  Naw I’m just finishing up the scene 🙂

@catwing Good night!