Selah CJW

@seekjustice

Yes I suppose that makes sense. Thanks! (now I’m imagining my character doing cooking and it, uh, doesn’t feel too right).

The scene is written from my side character’s POV and my MC is not even there at all (they haven’t met yet) so the purpose of the scene is foreshadowing to introduce a character and an element that my MC will…[Read more]

@valtmy Sort of. 🙂  I’ve written enough that I could post it, but nothing exciting happens in any of the scenes I’ve written lately, since they’re just resolution scenes for the earlier excitements.  I was planning to wait until I at least had something new that would be a little bit interesting before posting the next section.

I don’t want to b…[Read more]

@rochellaine

Oooh, we’re having lasagna for dinner tomorrow night. Its my favourite dish 😀 Pasta is pretty bland, but I like it with other things. 🙂 Rice is my favourite though.

@valtmy

I think every scene does need a conflict or a goal of some kind, or else its going to be boring, but the goal doesn’t need to be a major one. For example, the…[Read more]

@rochellaine

You haven’t posted more of your western because of… scene structure?

@seekjustice Mm, sounds good!  I love Chinese food, but it gives me a stomachache, so…there’s always that balance when I have the chance to eat it. 😛  Oh, pasta is also a dish we eat a lot.  Mostly when my dad isn’t home, though, since he thinks pasta is bland. 😉  My mom makes a good spicy lasagna, though, that he does enjoy.

You’ll never gue…[Read more]

@rochellaine

I’m working on my WIP…

This is weird to ask but… does every scene necessarily need a goal/conflict/outcome or reaction/decision? Because the scene I’m working on does seem important (it introduces a side character, does some foreshadowing and drops some hints of important events that happen in the background) but it doesn’t seem…[Read more]

@valtmy

Hello! I’m hoping to read at least a few pages of your WIP today 🙂

@rochellaine

That’s good 😀

I did have a good lunch, it was nice. Left over Chinese was what I had for lunch today. We eat a lot of stew, curries, various pasta dishes and soup in our family. We’re having pumpkin soup for dinner tonight 🙂

@valtmy Hello!  What are you working on?  How is it going?

@rochellaine @seekjustice

Hey guys. I’m on now. 🙂

@jenwriter17 Okay, I’m not sure if I’ll be on tomorrow, but if I am, I hope to see you then! 🙂

😛 Thanks for the advice.  I’ll try to take it!  (Notice, I said TRY. 😉 )

@rochellaine ugh sorry I can’t write right now! (I feel like I say that a lot 🙁 ). But I can say with near certainty that I will be on tomorrow. 😉

Don’t stay up too late 😛

@seekjustice I haven’t listened to much yet, since I turned it off so I could read something I’m researching, but the start of it sounds like it’s going to be interesting.

Did you have a good lunch?  Say, you know what I eat, (Middle Eastern food,) but I don’t know what you eat… 😉  What did you have?

@rochellaine

Yep, I remember that one. I did read the summary on Wikipedia, and it looked good, but I haven’t listened to any of it other than the title song.

I’m back, by the way!

@seekjustice I don’t write very well when I’m listening to music.  I usually listen to music to get inspiration, then turn it off to write.  But in between writing I’m starting to listen to the Lost in the Stars soundtrack.  I’ve never listened to it before, so we’ll see how I like it. 🙂  Did you read the plot of that musical?  Do you reme…[Read more]

@rochellaine

Yep, I’m going now 😀

I’m listening to the Les Mis 10th Anniversary Dream Cast at the moment, which is my favourite version. You?

@seekjustice Congratulations! 🙂  Okay, I guess that means you’ll be leaving for lunch soon, though.

Listened to or sung anything interesting today?

@rochellaine

I actually never left, because lunch isn’t ready yet. However, I finished Chessy’s torture scene, so I’m actually making some progress here.

@seekjustice I’m back now.  How about you?

@rochellaine

Obviously he wasn’t particularly memorable before 😛 Yes, I was trying to develop him a bit more.

Me too. I’m going to get some lunch and then I’ll be back 😉