Selah CJW

@rochellaine @dragon-snapper aw, you’re both leaving? 🙁 Have a nice day! 🙂

@jenwriter17 @rochellaine Finished checking through the blog post so I’m headed out now! 😀

@jenwriter17 That’s great!! I’ve got to go now.  See you later!

@dragon-snapper Hi! 😀

@rochellaine Going well I think. Lots to do, but I like that. 🙂 ( hope to have my blog up next week!!!)

@jenwriter17 Sure, I’ll show you. 🙂  I think it’s almost done, but I’m going to have to go soon so I don’t know if I’ll be able to finish it during this writing session.

How’s your stuff going?

@jenwriter17 I have arrived. Working on a blog post.

@rochellaine writers’ corner is acting funny, so I’m gonna go ahead and start a new corner…

@jenwriter17 Hm, sounds interesting.  I don’t know if I’d like it though. 😛

Nope!  I’m actually finally writing fanfiction for Stars Fill Infinity!! 😀 😀 ( @seekjustice )

It looks like we need a new Writers’ Corner.  We’re bouncing back from our posts again. 😉  You want to start one?

@rochellaine Awesome! I’m sipping sparkling strawberry lemonade 😛 (so. good.)

hmm….your western? 😉

@jenwriter17 I’m here… 🙂

You’ll never guess what I’m working on, though. 😉 😛

@rochellaine @seekjustice @alia @kaya-young @skredder @catwing @daughteroftheking @dragon-snapper @dekreel I’m editing/rewriting/doing website stuffs! Anyone on?

( @Leumeister Oh, you’re so welcome. ;D I’m very glad it’s helping. ^_^)

@valtmy 🙂 Okay, I’ll try to get to your chapters soon.  Right now, though, I’ve got to go to sleep. 😀  I have completely disregarded Jen’s advice to go to bed early, but I definitely need to sleep now! 😛

See you later!  Goodnight.

@rochellaine

My own work is… 😅

By the way, I am still waiting for your feedback on my first three chapters. *hint, hint*

Haha it’s OK though. I know you’re busy with exams and I have to focus on what I’m currently working on now instead of getting distracted by my previous parts.

@valtmy Haha! 😛 I think if it were animated a lot of those decisions would go to the animator. 😉  But I really like your descriptions of the characters!  My MC definitely thinks he’s smart, but isn’t, and the way he describes the nurse as fainting like a Hollywood actress does give you the picture that she’s as you say, a “brainless beauty w…[Read more]

@rochellaine

I am imagining the narration of the MC being in this very pompous tone of someone who thinks he is very smart but isn’t (I mean he doesn’t even know what a prosthetic is???). The doctor could be this nervous, stuttering geek and the nurse a brainless beauty with a flair for the dramatic. Not sure if that’s how you’re seeing it but…[Read more]

@valtmy I was actually thinking the same thing!!  I just don’t know how I would get it to be filmed.  Maybe I’ll ask Leumeister if he’s interested.  I think he sometimes does animation.  What would you think of an animated short with my story as the voice-over and the animated characters acting it out?

@rochellaine

That’s probably true. 😛

I actually think your piece will work well as a short film where you can see all the crowding and jostling and it’ll be funny to watch the overdramatic reactions that the incompetent doctors and nurses have. But just reading it as a story makes me go “Really? What kind of doctor/nurse will do that?” If it…[Read more]

@valtmy That’s an interesting idea.  I don’t know that I would do it with this story.  I’m more inclined to agree with @seekjustice that it’s a simple, slapstick story and doesn’t need depth to make sense, because it’s not supposed to make sense. 😉  However, right now I have one of you on either side, so I’ll just talk to a few other people an…[Read more]