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Alia replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
@seekjustice, @valtmy, I doubt either of you are around, but if you are, care to join me?
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
@seekjustice It is amazing how different and yet how similar other families can be to ours at the same time. It does seem like a sort of paradox. 😀
Haha, real people tend to be harder to describe than the characters in books; no matter how complex the characters are, human beings have something that only God can give them, and mere imitations…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
@seekjustice Yes, my parents use that in their marriage counseling. They say that everyone comes from different subcultures, or mini, family-cultures. It’s easier to notice when you come from drastically different backgrounds, but every family has different ways of doing things, and it’s important to talk it all out before you get in a fight b…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
@seekjustice Well, I’ve read too many books where authors dismiss the traditions of other cultures because they sound silly to them in the culture where they were raised. 😛 I’ve got a bit of experience in understanding that someone else’s culture could be different because my mom and dad came from such different cultures. (You know my dad’s M…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
@seekjustice Tevye isn’t perfect, but he’s funny, and his relationship with God is cool, when you listen to his prayers.
I think there wasn’t meant to be much closure. Tevye did say “and God be with you” in the end, but the end of the film seems to be a dreary hope that one day things may be better, rather than the bright day of a new…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
@valtmy Is it okay if I answer a few of your comments? I’ve read the second draft of her book, and a few things have changed…
For one, Chessy is noted to be adopted from the first, so it is no longer a surprise in the second book. That helps for continuity. 😀
Oh yes, about the trial! I agree with you. Why didn’t Jean and Quillon just te…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
@seekjustice Oh, wowly-wow!! 😛 I am impressed. What did you think of Fiddler on the Roof? My family sees the theme in that to be “when you rebel against traditions simply because you feel like it, rather than for a good reason, society crumbles.” or something like that. I’m bad at being concise, so that might not be a fully correct sta…[Read more]
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valtmy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
Hey. 🙂 I’m answering your questions here. I may have missed out some things because they did not cross my mind at the moment but here goes:
When did you feel like the story had really begun?
The prologue. It was necessary in order to understand what was going on and it informs readers of the first book that Jean is not Chessy’s b…[Read more] -
Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
@seekjustice Very true. Because we are taught that life was horrible for women back in those days, it obviously must have been. But it was really just women were treated differently in different parts of the countries or world, like they are now. I think people were happier back then as a general rule, too, more than they are now, because ba…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
@seekjustice I just looked it up, and then remembered that I have had pizza with eggs on it before, but for dinner at a nice restaurant. Apparently you can eat that for breakfast too. Another very popular switch-up here is people very often have what we call “breakfast for dinner,” meaning you eat waffles or pancakes for dinner instead of b…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
@seekjustice I would be surprised if we didn’t have breakfast pizza. I don’t recall hearing of it before, though. The thing is, America is a blending of such diverse cultures that we have many different types and versions of foods for all the different meals and snacks. Sure, people will give you main foods that are popular among Ame…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
@seekjustice Ah…no, I meant that I found the conversation hilarious. But then, I find almost every conversation we have here hilarious, so that’s nothing new. 😉
@alia I wouldn’t say they’re a full romance series. The first two books have absolutely no romance in them at all, since the series starts when she’s 14 and the series ends s…[Read more]
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Alia replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
@seekjustice, @valtmy, @rochellaine, it is 11 here so I’m gonna sign out now. Talk to y’all later.
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Alia replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
@valtmy, yeah, my characters are never going to flirt. Probably the main reason is that I am going to try and not write in romance *glares at two characters in book 2 of a series I have just started*.
@seekjustice, I’m pretty sure the same thing happens to me, however I can’t write about it because I’m not informed until later where the…[Read more]
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
@seekjustice @alia Oh, this is hilarious. 😛
By the way, my go-to for flirting examples is always the Patty Fairfield series by Carolyn Wells. Wells writes flirtation so well!! Should I post an example for you? (by the way, I’ve never written flirting, so my plans for writing it are all theoretical. 😉 )
I just got distracted reading all our o…[Read more]
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valtmy replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
I guess I can accept that but I would really like for the reason why these people are following this fellow who is clearly less wise than them to be explained in the story. Maybe when Jonas and Chessy are talking after he asks her whether she likes Justice, Jonas can mention that.
Speaking of characters that are bad at…[Read more]
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Alia replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
@seekjustice, right? most of my friends are guys, and according to my two gal friends most of the time I talk to a guy is considered flirting by society, but for the life of me I can’t see where the friendly conversation ends and the flirtation begins.
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Alia replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
@seekjustice, good job Zac!
honestly, sometimes being a writer is hard because in order for us to write something like flirting well, we actually have to go and do it ourselves, which just ends up being awkward
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Alia replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
@seekjustice, well Zac still flirted better than I can. Which isn’t saying much because A. I don’t flirt, and B. I’m sure I would be terrible at it. But hey! At least Zac is better than someone
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Rochellaine replied to the topic Writers' Corner #18 in the forum General Writing Discussions 7 years, 10 months ago
@alia During the first book I got pretty annoyed with Chessy for falling for an unbeliever. That situation was resolved in the second book, and because I began to feel more sorry for Justice, (and because of the window scenes,) I didn’t mind them getting together. I really thought she was going to go for Zac more, though. I would have… 😛 We…[Read more]
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