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Sara replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 3 months ago
I don’t want to hurt anyone’s feelings. But I didn’t want to ignore what was said. I felt it was better to point out, instead of ignoring it. I’ve had conversations with multiple people from different backgrounds, and we tend to leave with more perspective than when we came. That was part of my intention, but I guess many people don’t have the…
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Sara replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 3 months ago
You don’t have to answer anything I said…we can be done lol
I swear I wasn’t trying to argue…
Sara just gets confused and carried away sometimes so I’m sorry :/
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Sara replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 3 months ago
Yeah, I know.
That’s why I think we’re kind of done XD XD I did NOT mean for this to get blown up like this…
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Sara replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 3 months ago
WHOA WHOA WHOA I DID NOT MEAN TO START A FIGHT.
Yeah that’s what I’m feeling too…XD I feel like actually horrible :/
but it’s Ellette’s story, and she can do whatever she wants.
I second that.
I wasn’t attacking your story or telling you you should change it…I just wanted to discuss this a little bit because I love…[Read more]
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Sara replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 3 months ago
I’m not in any way trying to get you to believe how I believe! You don’t have to accept anything we’re saying…and I’m sorry if I made you feel that way. I think me and Whaley just like talking about stuff like this and we just saw this as an interesting topic to discuss.
It’s okay if you want to end it and I’m not going to…[Read more]
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Sara replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 3 months ago
Whether or not the marriage lasts, it’s important to have a healthy relationship with your partner. If the marriage lasts but it is a bad relationship, I would say it was a bad decision to get married.
Yes! I feel the same way!
It is possible to have a healthy marriage at a young age. You can do it. It is just hard to have a good o…
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Sara replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 3 months ago
well I’ve read a TON of books about Christian marriages and Biblical courtship/dating and I have never read that! Plus, I have witnessed a TON of beautiful marriages that started very young and have gone on for years!
Okay. I’m sorry if I’ve offended you! I’m just telling you my perspective.
I’m not saying that ALL young m…[Read more]
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Sara replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 3 months ago
Okay okay okay
Nevermind
XD
That’s just my personal opinion lol. I’m not saying you should do that, I was just saying how I feel. I don’t know…I just really really hate the idea of people getting married young, and I’m not sure why. So you do what you want with your story! See, this is why I need to stop looking at your book…[Read more]
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Sara replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 3 months ago
I know I said I was going to leave, but I’m just bored lol!
also, one little issue I have: maybe wait till Sabina’s at least 18? I’m 17 and I wouldn’t marry a guy now even if I knew him very well. My mom got married at 17 but I was under the impression she was the exception.
I agree with Keilah.
I know your story is set in medieval times, so th…[Read more]
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-GRCR- posted an update 3 months ago
It’s better to find the source of a problem and be unable to fix it than it is to fix the problem without knowing its source.
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 3 months ago
Thank you!! 😁
I don’t know if I’ve asked you this or not yet, but what software do you use for your drawings?
I use Clip Studio Paint.
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 3 months ago
Woah, wait… wow. Thank you! 😄😄
And thanks for the criticism!
except maybe his tunic wouldn’t have as dark of cuffs and collar, and there might be a bit of embroidery. Then again, this could be him in military uniform and then it works perfect.
Ohh… ok. I was concerned about that…
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Write to bring me pain. in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months ago
Lol I love this! 😈😈 And I am suddenly motivated to write lolol.
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months ago
@everyone @i’m-feeling-to-blah-to-actually-tag-anyone
*caveman voice* I wrote. I post.
Here is an Evelyn pov/rp… Hopefully you guys haven’t already made a kitchen part of the castle…. if so, i can change this up or something…. cuz that’s kinda where she lands… though I don’t think I described good.
Alright, must go hide.
EVELYN
Her eyes…[Read more]
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Art Challenge! in the forum Art 3 months ago
Umm… I clicked submit, but…uhh… my post disappeared. I’m reposting, so sorry if you get this twice…
ahhhh…. sorry i’m responding late-ish…. my days have become sooo busy lol 😅😑
I did draw him… today… just now…
So… here is my picture of Friedrich…
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 3 months ago
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-GRCR- posted an update 3 months, 1 week ago
My novel TPE | https://editor.reedsy.com/s/RPRuZql
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 1 week ago
Okay… here is my character. I may or may not add another later, if that’s ok… but for now I’m only doing one. 😁
Evelyn Bargomer
Age: 17
Ethnicity: In my book, she’s fully Burnish-Extroitian. If she were in the real world/from earth, she’d probably be a mix of South Korean, Chinese, and like Swedish, Danish or Norwegian… or…[Read more]
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-GRCR- replied to the topic What is the cringiest thing you've ever written? in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 months, 1 week ago
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Sara replied to the topic WIP: Let There Be Light, Book 1 of The Flames of Hope Trilogy in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 3 months, 1 week ago
I agree with Whaley…I need to step away too.
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