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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 11 months ago
@anyone-who-wishes-to-read
Chapter 7
Rage
Pain.
A distant, ever present throbbing at the base of Lilitu’s neck.
On your feet, he warned himself, or you’re dead. He put his weight on his bad foot and screamed in agony before he could stifle it.
Blue blood oozed from his numerous cuts, the edges searing like fire.
Lilitu scrambled back to…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 11 months ago
you want an em dash instead of a hyphen
Noted. Thank you!!!
Maybe this will be explained at some point, but it isn’t clear why the Paynes being moved to this new district would mean she doesn’t see them anymore, did they just move to completely different areas?
She doesn’t see them anymore because both she and them are always working, the…[Read more]
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 11 months ago
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
Sef
“You’re like my mom.”
She caught Chase staring, and giggled.
“Is that a good thing or a bad thing?”
She stroked the bird with her finger again.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Character doodles in the forum Art 1 year, 11 months ago
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 1 year, 11 months ago
Aahhhhhhh!!!! I love it!!! Thank you so much!!!! 😍😍😍
For all y’all who’ve sent me characters, this isn’t just a one shot only thing. If any of you have another character that you want me to draw just go ahead and send the description! My pencil fingers are itching for some more lovely characters!!
Alright! I may give anoth…[Read more]
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
That’s awesome! Any way we could get a link?
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
!!!!!!!!!!
Let’s go!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I haven’t chatted with Solfyre in a while, I’m so happy she’s made it! Is it her original sci-fi with the mixed breed wolf?
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 11 months ago
Good point. In that case, I need thearcaneaxiom (HELP) to help me make up more names for God/Jesus.
Late to the call. Is this still wanted?
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TheArcaneAxiom replied to the topic How dark is too dark? in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
I have an idea for a book, but I’m not sure if it’s too dark to write about. It was essentially going to be dystopian and where atomic bombs destroyed the major cities of the world, but looking back on it I realized how dark that actually is.
The main message was going to be that no matter how dark the times are, there is always hop…
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-GRCR- replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 11 months ago
I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THOSE SCENES YOU SHARED!! Gahh! Especially the second one! Now I like Riker even more!! XD XD
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 1 year, 11 months ago
*looks up what aesthetic means*
eh… not really. I could be using the word wrong, idk, cuz I guess I just meant it more in a… mmm… vibe sense? Ehhhhhhhhh…… just exclude that note. 😅
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 1 year, 11 months ago
Yes! That makes much more sense. Ok, we’ll see how this turns out. I’m glad this girl has a skirt. As I mentioned before, I draw all my girls in skirts or dresses, so it’s a little hard not to make girl’s legs look like guy’s. haha. (I never wear anything but dresses or skirts which could help make that harder. lol)
haha lol!
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 1 year, 11 months ago
Maybe those helped? 🤔
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 1 year, 11 months ago
If worse comes to worst, feel totally free to leave the tank just plain white… 😄😄
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 1 year, 11 months ago
part II
And by “something kawaii”, I basically mean just something cute as a front design, like on a tee shirt… so something like this would work:
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 1 year, 11 months ago
That is completely not me, so we’ll see how this goes. lol. 😀
lol same 😄
Oh, btw, do you have a picture of the tank-top. I’m not a fashion person so I have no idea what “something Kawaii” means. haha
lol I’ll have to use real pics….
The tank is very plain, and would look something like this:
part II of this message…[Read more]
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 1 year, 11 months ago
Ugh, so I can’t post two pics in one post, eh?
Give me a minute and I’ll repost… in two separate messages… 😒
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Character Sketches in the forum Art 1 year, 11 months ago
Alrighty, I’ll give a character of mine! 😄
Name: Fir Sayre
Age: Fifteen
Gender: Female
Clothing: She typically wears a stylish halter-top white tank top with something kawaii on the front, a pink hoodie wrapped around her waist, a knee length pink or pastel blue skirt, and some kind of white sneaker with white s…[Read more]
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