Sara

@theducktator @savannah_grace2009 @grcr @hybridlore (oh hey haven’t seen you in a while) @highscribeofaetherium ooh I might do it too!

plus we can all chat while we’re at it lol

@savannah_grace2009 You’re welcome!! I really like your ideas.

@savannah_grace2009

Well then linus and I will be partners in crime. No ships for us.

Catch us if you can…… (you have to find us first. lol and seeing as no one knows where anyone lives on here, that’ll be fun! hahaha)

@theducktator @savannah_grace2009 @grcr (Hi!)

I’m in!

@savannah_grace2009

I didn’t, and the “playlist police” didn’t arrest me. lolololol

@ducktator @savannah_grace2009

I’m back from my break, so I’m down to break the record too 😎😎

@savannah_grace2009 You kidding?? You have AMAZING worldbuilding!

@savannah_grace2009

You’re welcome. I’m encouraged to hear you found that encouraging.

I’m only 14…and it makes me mad when my writing’s not as good as older writers’…but then I have to slow down and remember that I’m doing good for the age I’m at and I have plenty of time to get better!!!

I should let you know I was horrible at writing until…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint @savannah_grace2009

sorry this took a minute! KP ate it and I only now just realized that it didn’t send. 🙁

The days passed, and Turin, Noah, Aaron, Darrien and the others continued to tell all they met of Christ’s love and sacrifice. Many did not want to listen, saying there was too much going on to consider such things. T…

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@savannah_grace2009, @ellette-giselle

Okay, I’m going to try this ‘Create a Playlist for Your Story’ thing, but I am going to need to think about it first. Also, I have one question, what does ‘Main Ship’ mean? Is this something to do with romance (I’m guessing that ship is short for relationship)? The first book in my series does not have any…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

I’m 21. The other guy is 20.

NO WONDER!! I’ve been thinking “how is he so good with his critiques!!”

@savannah_grace2009

Oh yes, and what Linus said about Aaron goofing off and doing the handstand on the border is what I mean about showing a LITTLE immaturity. If you make him a little…idk, funnier and give his personality mor…

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@savannah_grace2009 did you add “It’s Raining Tacos” in there on purpose??? LOL

@savannah_grace2009 thanks! It’s still being worked on but I greatly enjoy making up creatures like this 😁

I’m working on a drawing of a Suilean today, hopefully I’ll have him finished by tomorrow.

@savannah_grace2009

Thank you for the list. So your creatures are humans with different skin/hair colour and that colour relates to powers they have. So are Eloy and Cassian half-brothers then?

Pythonos demonstrate how we can’t break free from Satan’s power unless Jesus helps us to see the lies we believe and we resist the devil, like the ver…

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@savannah_grace2009 @ellette-giselle

Stepping in here about your conversation about the character’s ages. I do imagine Aaron as around 18 years of age. Similar to you, Ellette, in my church 18-year-olds do get married and do show maturity. There is one who Aaron kind of reminds me of who is a year younger than me, being 20 years old, but I feel…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

You might not be able to give me world advice, but certainly you can help with other things, like if a paragraph just doesn’t make sense, or a character is going out of their personality, etc.

Plus, what I mostly need right now is to see how readers respond to the story itself. ya know.

I’ll send the next scene if you’re ready!

@savannah_grace2009

ack! i messed up your tag. two messages above for you!

@savannah_grace2009

Ummmm I was the one who keeps getting your story COMPLETELY WRONG!!! Sorry again…….I feel soooo bad 😔😔

Don’t feel bad! It means I have a few things to make clearer. I won’t be around to correct every reader. lol.

(AND Aaron acts older than Turin XD)

Aaron is more mature then Turin.

I think I’d just like to see more of Aaron…

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@savannah_grace2009 @anyone_else_whos_intereste

                Against All Odds Playlist!!

1.) Jonathan: h ttps://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s_WNDIybIXs

2.) Jack: h ttps://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bwvRaHmn694

3.) Villain: h ttps://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IskFoAob2wY&list=PL61EA7836AA4687F1&index=6

4.) Main ship: There is none.…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009 @linus-smallprint

Ok, here’s the next part….. and then things get bad. lol.

Morning dawned, and after breakfast and a time of prayer, the men and boys went off to train with the soldiers.

Turin was a born fighter, and the way of the sword seemed natural and easy to him. Aaron, on the other hand, found sword craft less to…

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