Sara

@savannah_grace2009 @whalekeeper

Someone is having a hard time staying off until Christmas. lolololololol 😀

You might need to try outlining books based on a plot structure…like the Three Act Structure, because it hooks your readers more and you can kind of sense them pushing toward a goal.

Hmmm, well, I have to disagree. I will NEVER start a…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009 @ellette-giselle
I can try XD
I think the focus needs to be waaay deeper. The writing is very much outside the characters’ perspective, and only tells the bare points of the story. So the orphanage endeavor feels random.
To compare it to something, the perspective is like a bird high in the sky. Everything below looks like doll…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

I generally cry by myself too. Talking to people is too awkward.😬 Ugh.

@savannah_grace2009

Glad to see someone else feels the same XD Life is hard, that way.

@ellette-giselle @keilah-h @smiley @mineralizedwritings @lightoverdarkness6 @koshka @whalekeeper @loopylin @kyronthearcanin @grcr @rae @savannah_grace2009 @euodia-vision @elishavet-pidyon @anyone-else @I’m-too-overwhelmed-to-remember-tags-lolllll

I’ve been inactive on KP for the past several days, I know XXD It’s been a crazy past few days, esp…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint @theshadow @whalekeeper  @savannah_grace2009(I’ll tag you in case you still want to keep reading this)

Ok, here is the next part. It’s pretty short, but i have some edits to run on the part after, which is very long.

It took some time for the crowd to disperse. Only one child had believed, but Aaron was far from discouraged.…

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@ellette-giselle @keilah-h @loopylin @stephie @theshadow @savannah_grace2009 (I know you are taking a break from Kingdome Pen, Sara, so I will just tag you this final time until you return)

Since Wyoh or whatever we are calling the creature that is currently devouring images is on the loose, I will share images of my characters through other…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009 Thank youuuuuuu. and yes, Riker deals with a lot of trouble😅😅

@savannah_grace2009

Thanks for the suggestion, I’ll check out some ideas Pinterest.

@theducktator

What I’m thinking for the characters is that both like to show off/prove to others that they’re as good at things as they think they are. So they’re not exactly mortal enemies, but they’re definitely both competitive.

@highscribeofaetherium

Praying! 🙏🏻

@savannah_grace2009

I can’t remember if I told you before, but I’m praying for the request you post a little while back. 💕💕

@whalekeeper @savannah_grace2009 @linus-smallprint

I’m a little scared……. lol. Here’s a short section.

Aaron had been speaking for more than an hour, carefully explaining the Gospel from the garden to the resurrection. Now, he looked about at the people. A few were crying, most stared at him, in disbelief, and a few had suspicion in…

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@whalekeeper @savannah_grace2009 @linus-smallprint

I kinda feel like this died out……… should I post anymore or are y’all no longer interested in it? If you aren’t that’s ok.

Thanks for all y’all’s help!

@savannah_grace2009 @rae @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @ellette-giselle @keilah-h @grcr @whalekeeper @loopylin @esther-c @mineralizedwritings @anyone-else-idk-lol

I realized I hadn’t shared these scenes I wanted to share😂 This is an earlier chapter in Broken Shackles, one of the first 10 chapters…and I just wanted to share it since I just edited…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Really just how to make a good one. I’ve never written one before but I want to give it a try. With the two characters in mind I have no idea how to write them interacting with each other or how their rivalry would function.

@savannah_grace2009

Ofc 💗💗

Yess for real! I always am like “well this sucks but it’s worth it” because I always grow SO MUCH CLOSER to God at camp!!

YESS!!! Samee here.

You’re so generous XD XD thanks girl hahaha

XDXD you’re so welcome girl

Thank you sooo much girl you have no idea how much that means to me!!!! Love you too Light!!!! <333…

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@savannah_grace2009

 

BUT YOUR SHORT STORY ON YOUR MAGAZINE WAS SO GOOD I GOT CHILLS!!!!

Thank you!!!! You just made my day!!

@savannah_grace2009

 

I get that! Just let us know if you’re ever sick of critiques and just want to hear the positive stuff to get encouraged!

Haha, but that would be all the time…… lol. I don’t like getting told there’s something wrong with my book, but I also know that it will NEVER get better if I don’t have real help from people l…[Read more]