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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 hours, 44 minutes ago
i think so. He’s in the barn talking to martha
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 hours, 45 minutes ago
Okay. well, the Stripe one of course. That would be super funny/cute, especially with his ears flat. lol.
Maybe one of Martha and Alan talking. I would like to see Martha in an actual scene.
i’ll have to think more on this.
Do you mean the scene where Alan is about to head out with the Humlers and Oliver to find his d…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 hours, 47 minutes ago
Hmm, wow, must have really sobered you. No comment on the amount of exclamation marks. lol. After I posted it, I looked back and was like, “wow, there’s a lot.” lol.
And no comment on the fact that I offed Joseph’ best friends.
Ah. So there was a positive event in there. This is what you were referring too.
Yes, and I have a…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 hours, 49 minutes ago
As for the actual plot of everything, I really like what you did with the crow there. Ties in nicely. I’m curious as to what the king’s doing. Is he trying to help Alan? It may be that because he was interested in Alan’s success, he ordered the arrests of the Faithful in order to get rid of one of the wizard’s obstacles. But now, will he…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 hours, 50 minutes ago
Maybe. This is a question I will ask at the end, but so far, what would the top scenes that you would like to see illustrations for be?
Ooo, I haven’t thought of this really.
Okay. well, the Stripe one of course. That would be super funny/cute, especially with his ears flat. lol.
Maybe one of Martha and Alan talking. I would…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 hours, 51 minutes ago
“Today, the gates of every village, town and city will be thrown wide open! You will return to your homes, if you wish. You will farm the land; you will travel and trade where you will within Ardenta!”
Ah. So there was a positive event in there. This is what you were referring too.
“Let them go!” came a shout.
Joseph looked a…
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Stephie replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 hours, 57 minutes ago
As for the actual plot of everything, I really like what you did with the crow there. Ties in nicely. I’m curious as to what the king’s doing. Is he trying to help Alan? It may be that because he was interested in Alan’s success, he ordered the arrests of the Faithful in order to get rid of one of the wizard’s obstacles. But…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 hours, 6 minutes ago
Aside from Stripe being hugged, I really enjoyed the chapter.I’m glad you brought the crow back in. I was wondering how long it would be before you tied that part of the plot back into the story.
I haven’t been entirely sure how to fit it in all the time. Especially since many of its scenes are just it watching and Alan being a l…[Read more]
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Linus Smallprint replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 hours, 12 minutes ago
YEEEESSSS!!!!!
STRIPE HAS BEEN HUGGED!!!!
*does a happy dance* – Stephie
Yippy! Stripe was HUGGED!!!! – Ellette
*Bows*
AWWWWW! it was soooooo cute!!!!!! Now you have to draw a picture of it!!!
Maybe. This is a question I will ask at the end, but so far, what would the top scenes that you would like to see illustrations for be?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 hours, 22 minutes ago
@hybridlore @linus-smallprint @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @grcr
NEXT SECTION!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Joseph sat at the table and stared at his plate. Noah and Darrien had already eaten and were pulling on their boots. They knew the hard day of work they had ahead, and they had been able to eat
Sabina put her arm over Joseph’s sh…
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Cloaked Mystery replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 hours, 39 minutes ago
@everyone
It doesn’t seem like too many people have been posting, but for those of you that have, I apologize for having been absent for a while. I’ve been a bit busy lately, but with Thanksgiving break coming up, I’ll probably have time to get on here.
I would post now, but I’ve sort of lost track of what’s happening, so it will take me a bit…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 hours, 31 minutes ago
Yippy! Stripe was HUGGED!!!!
AWWWWW! it was soooooo cute!!!!!! Now you have to draw a picture of it!!!
Aside from Stripe being hugged, I really enjoyed the chapter.I’m glad you brought the crow back in. I was wondering how long it would be before you tied that part of the plot back into the story.
Also, one…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 hours, 43 minutes ago
Woah, are you accusing me of being a sadist?
lololololol.
Thanks I’ll check it out!
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Stephie replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 7 hours, 9 minutes ago
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The Ducktator replied to the topic What's new around here? < 3 in the forum Questions and Support 14 hours, 2 minutes ago
Oh, he is.🤣 I’ll have to remember that.
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic What's new around here? < 3 in the forum Questions and Support 14 hours, 3 minutes ago
Sounds like a character XD
if you want to be confusing you can say わかりません(Wakarimasen) which means ‘I don’t understand’ next time lol.
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The Ducktator replied to the topic What's new around here? < 3 in the forum Questions and Support 14 hours, 6 minutes ago
Our entire conversation was weird.🤣 He also randomly speaks in a British accent during co-op, so yeah. XD
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic What's new around here? < 3 in the forum Questions and Support 14 hours, 12 minutes ago
Yw! I love language questions lol. Yeah Japanese doesn’t have the ah sound in abby, only the au sound so that probably is your name. Idk why somebody would say thanks in a language the recipient doesn’t know 😂😂
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The Ducktator replied to the topic What's new around here? < 3 in the forum Questions and Support 14 hours, 14 minutes ago
Thanks! That last word is supposed to be my name, I think. I’m Abby.
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MineralizedWritings replied to the topic What's new around here? < 3 in the forum Questions and Support 14 hours, 22 minutes ago
Oh that sounds cool! I’ve seen western towhees here, we get owls sometimes too.
Oh yes! I mean I don’t really speak it, but I can read basic stuff okay.
ありがとう is Arigatou, or thank you.
アビイ is Katakana, which is used for words that are foreign in Japan (Like American names). I’m assuming this is a Japanized version of the…[Read more]
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