Sarah Hoven

@dekreel thanks for tagging me! Sorry I didn’t respond sooner- for some reason I’m not getting notifications anymore. Technology’s great except when it’s not, right? 😛
And that is totally awesome. XD

@Daeus Yay! *lemonade and cheesecake for all*

I definitely prefer “Awestruck to see that in dark the lights dance”.

@Daeus

‘Most comely he smiled’ is better

And little Teedletiden he fashioned for the trees
For all of these a city, Letharill, he made
Its glory was established that it should never fade[ I’m unsure about the meter in these last three lines, especially lines 1 and 3.]

Maybe instead: ‘And little Teedletiden he fashioned for trees

For all t…[Read more]

@Daeus Thanks.

Well, you’d better come up with an epic soundtrack for it then. 😉

@Daeus Oh hey, could I have it in a doc too? I was going to do it without one, but that sounds a much more efficient option.

I don’t write poetry, but I certainly appreciate good poetry, especially with good cadence.  That’s my favorite part.

I read through it, and it’s beautiful, and I do have some metrical suggestions.

Also, I feel compelled…[Read more]

@That_Writer_Girl_99 My pleasure. XD

@That_Writer_Girl_99 Yay!!! Congratulations, and may you reap the goodness of KP for many more years. 😉 D’ye remember our first conversation? It was regarding Luke Skywalker and whether or not he’s whiny. XD

@that_writer_girl_99. YAY!!! A whole year! So glad you joined us. 🙂 And it really is wonderful how much you can learn in the bestistest place on the internet! Happy KP-versary!

@Dekreel This is great. XD And I agree with @ClaireC, the small installments are nice; makes it easier to read and in one sitting. 😉

@PerfectFifths If you really could cut in perfect fifths that would be quite a feat.

@dekreel, good work. 🙂 I like the small installments.

@dragon-snapper, uuuuuummmmmmmm.

yeah.

I’m not going to be much help with this, cause I do the same thing.

One of the things I’ve found helpful is, like @daeus said, insert hope. Your characters should be driven by their goals.

Unless your MC is like mine, who is just plain hurting and miserable, and kind of takes it out on everyone else.…[Read more]

*when you should be studying for your Philosophy exam but would rather laugh at other Keepers’ insane awesomeness*
Yep. You guys are the greatest. XD

@christianna-hellwig, You have a beautiful range! And yeah, sopranos… we might be a little biased, but it’s so much fun! 😉

I recently did the Rogers and Hammerstein musical ‘Cinderella’, and really loved it. About 200 people auditioned and the cast had 80 in the end which is pretty big for a musical! I auditioned for the role of Cinderella,…[Read more]

@seekjustice, sorry, I’m wading through school sorting. My table’s covered in paper, but the words on it it aren’t nice story words. 🙁

@christianna-hellwig

Opera! I don’t sing much classic opera, (German, Italian, etc.), but I love singing things like ‘The Phantom of the Opera’.

And I’m a soprano (G3 to E6). You?

Um, yeah. Hilarious, or cringy, one of those. 😀

Yes! I’m currently writing a novel about an Australian nurse in WWII, serving in PNG. It’s alternative historical fiction.

@dekreel, that’s great! Well done. 🙂

@christianna-hellwig, they take a bit of getting used to. 😉

I play piano, guitar, and sing. I’m thinking about studying vocals at University. Did you study something musical at College, since you’re now composing an opera?

I’ve only been writing seriously for 4 years, so no finished books yet, but I’ve been thinking I can write since I was…[Read more]

@christianna-hellwig, Welcome to the bestistest place on the internet! 🙂

You. Write. Opera.!!!!!???????????!!!!!!!!!!

How did no one else pick up on that??? @dekreel, @that_writer_girl_99, @rochellaine, @mnvalentine….

Anyways. WOW! How long have you been composing for?

I play a couple of instruments but would really like to play violin……[Read more]