@sarah-h
Active 8 years, 7 months ago- Rank: Knight in Shining Armor
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Sarah Hoven replied to the topic Sword fighting in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 8 months ago
Oops, I said that was my last question, but now I have another. 🙂 So, would a typical English broadsword in 1311 be one-handed, one-and-a-half handed, or two handed? Or did they use all three kinds at that time?
Thank you for being so helpful, Daeus. And thank you, Kate, for your imput. I’d never heard of a hand and a half sword before. -
Sarah Hoven replied to the topic Sword fighting in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 8 months ago
One last question- do you hold a broadsword with one hand, or both hands?
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Sarah Hoven replied to the topic Sword fighting in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 8 months ago
Thank you! Yes, I meant a guard.
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Sarah Hoven replied to the topic Sword fighting in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 8 months ago
Thank you very much! Yes, I meant a guard.
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Sarah Hoven replied to the topic Sword fighting in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 8 months ago
In broadsword fighting, is there a difference between a defensive stance and an offensive stance?
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Sarah Hoven replied to the topic Favorite biographies in the forum Non-Fiction 10 years, 8 months ago
If you do, I would definitely want to read it.
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Sarah Hoven replied to the topic Sword fighting in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 8 months ago
Yes, my fight scene definitely fails. I will improve it. Thanks for suggesting that I use short sentences; I can see how that would add to the tension, suspense, etc. that I am trying to create.
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Sarah Hoven replied to the topic Unrealistic Romance in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 8 months ago
I am definitely not an expert on love at first sight, but I think it might be possible, because it happened to Corrie ten Boom’s brother. Maybe, though, love isn’t quite the right word for that occurrence, because, like you said, true love is built on sacrifice and service, not emotions.
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Sarah Hoven replied to the topic Background Information in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 8 months ago
Thanks, Mark! I will definitely remember to go easy on the long speeches. 🙂
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Sarah Hoven replied to the topic Favorite biographies in the forum Non-Fiction 10 years, 8 months ago
My favorite autobiographies are Alicia: My Story by Alicia Jurman and In Hitler’s Germany by Bernt Engelmann (although it’s not exactly a biography). The Hiding Place is also one of my favorites.
Daeus, your great grandfather survived the Armenian Massacres? That’s amazing. Was that when the Ottoman Empire killed one million Armenians? Or was…[Read more] -
Sarah Hoven replied to the topic Hujambo! in the forum Start HERE 10 years, 8 months ago
Really? That’s so exciting! I’ve always wanted to be a missionary (and I still do, of course). Do you know yet which country in Africa The Lord is sending you to?
I can definitely relate to your last comment. The earlier drafts of my novel have so much plagiarism I’m embarrassed to read them. 🙂 -
Sarah Hoven replied to the topic Howdy Y'all! in the forum Start HERE 10 years, 8 months ago
Princess Jewels- what a beautiful name. We rarely call our birds by their real names, either. 🙂
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Sarah Hoven replied to the topic Hujambo! in the forum Start HERE 10 years, 8 months ago
Wow, that is neat. It must have been cool to speak with a native Swahilian. Do you think you’ll ever go to Africa?
Yes, they are intense, and very difficult to read (for me, at least). I definitely do not recommend any of her later books; the romance in them is too…adult.
I’ve read two of the Anne of Green Gable books. How many are there in the…[Read more] -
Sarah Hoven replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Start HERE 10 years, 8 months ago
Hi, Carilyn!
Wow, you self-published your novel? Congratulations! -
Sarah Hoven replied to the topic Unrealistic Romance in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 8 months ago
That sounds fun. I’m not completely sure what a thread is, but I guess I’ll find out! 🙂
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Sarah Hoven replied to the topic Unrealistic Romance in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 8 months ago
I have no idea; I’ve never done anything like this before. What do you and Kate think?
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Sarah Hoven replied to the topic Sword fighting in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 8 months ago
Thank you so much, Daeus! The soldier has been fighting for at least 16 years, and is very experienced, while the knight is in his early twenties. I probably should have included those details in my first post; sorry about that! Your explanation of the different moves was exactly what I was looking for. Thank you.
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Sarah Hoven replied to the topic Sword fighting in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 years, 8 months ago
Thank you, Daeus and Rolena.
Daeus, my story takes place in the year 1311, and the fight is between two Englishmen; the soldier is older, taller, and stronger, but the knight has more training. At first, I had the soldier conquer the knight almost immediately, but I don’t think that is realistic. So I decided to make the fight longer; and that’s…[Read more] -
Sarah Hoven replied to the topic Hi guys! in the forum Start HERE 10 years, 8 months ago
Hi, Jada! Welcome to Kingdom Pen!
What kind of writing have you done so far? -
Sarah Hoven replied to the topic Hujambo! in the forum Start HERE 10 years, 8 months ago
Wow! Teaching yourself a foreign language is quite an accomplishment. I’m trying to teach myself Hebrew, but it sounds like you are far ahead of me! 🙂 Isn’t Swahili an African language? What alphabet does it use?
Thanks; I will be on the lookout for them.
Hm… I have a lot of favorites, but the ones that come to mind right now are Frank…[Read more] - Load More
