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Daeus replied to the topic Song for my book in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 7 months ago
@christianna-hellwig @rochellaine @emma-flournoy @that_writer_girl_99
Thanks so much for your suggestions, everyone! Here’s what I have now.
“Oh, stars that remember the firstthings forgotten
How earth and its peoples were early begotten
They looked and beheld through a pane of dark glass
The earth in a swirling, untamable mass
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic When it all seems rather unnerving… in the forum Start HERE 8 years, 7 months ago
@christianna-hellwing I really like books by Chuck Black, Robert Treskillard, and Douglas Bond. in the way of movies, I like the Marvel movies, the newer version of Karate Kid, and other action packed movies.
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Catwing replied to the topic Comic Poem Tag Experiment in the forum Poetry 8 years, 7 months ago
@rochellaine Thank you, potato-squash is my random-non-random thingie. :3
Also thank you! I can be funny. Sometimes.@salome01w4g I think you can do it! Maybe it can go on your resume.
~Made a poem out of a random-non-random phrase some internet Catwing said. It was later awarded such-and-such medal. It also made you hungry. (And by you I mean…[Read more]
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Catwing replied to the topic One of my MCs is a MK in the forum Characters 8 years, 7 months ago
@rochellaine I think that counts too. At least for my research and questions. 😀 Thank you.
@sleepwalkingmk *facepalm* I completely forgot that she needs to go to school. But she will be homeschooled. How did I overlook that?
@sarah-anson Sadly Vanessa will still have to be school while they are there.
I’m a perfect angel.
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Daeus replied to the topic Song for my book in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 7 months ago
@christianna-hellwig Thanks so much! I’ll take a look over this as soon as I get a chance.
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Daeus replied to the topic Song for my book in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 7 months ago
@emma-flournoy Ha! Well, we’ll see. I’d certainly love to.
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Daeus replied to the topic Song for my book in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 7 months ago
@emma-flournoy Sure, here’s one. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1oV9qnLtpy4Cwn8-JFfJaXzOn4A5-yqRBR-AqlFIyYdk/edit?usp=sharing
Yeah, song creation and all that. I probably should have come up with something more original, but in my defense the song creation is the basis for the whole magical system, the last book’s allegorical aspects, and the…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Song for my book in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 7 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99 @rochellaine Thanks. 😀
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Daeus replied to the topic Song for my book in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 7 months ago
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Daeus replied to the topic Song for my book in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 7 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99 More for metric pattern, but either one.
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Daeus started the topic Song for my book in the forum Poetry Critiques 8 years, 7 months ago
Hi KeePers,
Any of you who write structured poetry, I could use a bit of help with a poem I’ve written. This is for the fantasy novel I’m writing and essentially recounts the first events of the world.
My problem is that I know a few spots have clunky meter. I generally have a good ear for meter and maybe I could fix this by myself, but…[Read more]
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Daeus replied to the topic Unlikable Protagonist? in the forum Characters 8 years, 7 months ago
@introvert_girl Sam really said it already, but you can also add a backstory to show why the character acts the way they do. The overall tone of the story will help too. I think though that the most important thing is proactivity, like Sam said.
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Snapper changed their profile picture 8 years, 7 months ago
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's Corner #13 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
@sam-kowal *is honored that you think me a hero in dragondom*
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's Corner #13 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
To Stan: No, I’m still a dragon. I can still melt chairs. This is just the human me. Worry not, Stan. We’re still dragon friends. *offers you a melted chair*
To Sam: 😛 (XD Still a dragon. Once a dragon, always a dragon.) I wrote 1144, so I’m signing out now. 🙂 Good luck on your new book!
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's Corner #13 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
@sam-kowal *nods* XD
Turns to Stan: Why aren’t you talking to Sam? I thought you two were best buds?
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's Corner #13 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
@sam-kowal *hands Stan cough medicine* Why, what’s wrong with him?
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Jenna Terese replied to the topic A Year Ago… in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
@that_writer_girl_99 maybe we could just pick a date. say, idk, *slaps calendar in random spot* May 20th or something. We could make a special topic for that day, everyone can share what they love about KP, how they found it, etc. and if anyone has a KP shirt, they must wear it that day 🙂 maybe we could write short stories or poems to celebrate…[Read more]
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Snapper posted an update 8 years, 7 months ago
@kate-flournoy @dekreel @hope @anyone else… Just letting you guys know that I change my name and profile picture, so if you can’t find Dragon Snapper, that’s where I am. XD 😛
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@dragon-snapper
Whoa. Mixed emotions. This is different5% of me is going: “Cool!”
Another 5% of me: “OMIWORD I KNOW HER NAME!”90% of me: “NoOoOoOoOO, I liked your dragon self! CHANGE BACK!!” *starts crying*
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XD I’m keeping my name up, but you two win. I’m a dragon again. 😛 @sam-kowal @dekreel (I think I like it better too. LOL) I can’t change my profile picture without a revolt, can I?
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I actually did not mean to sound that heartbroken XD I was moody when I wrote that. But fair enough XD
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@dekreel XD Don’t worry about it. On here, I’m a dragon. It must stay that way forever. AND EVER!
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Snapper replied to the topic Writer's Corner #13 in the forum General Writing Discussions 8 years, 7 months ago
@sam-kowal Sweet! 😀 I should be on for another 20 minutes or so…
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